The translation is trash. This book was clearly not proof-read before being released.
This novel must have been written by the 12 year old son of the owner of Qidian or something. Otherwise it is beyond me how it could reach rank 1. Everything within this story barely scratches the surface. Ability? Family? World building? Main character? Friends and Love Interest? Each of those barely get half a sentence in passing, before we move on to the next clichee.
- The idea is good, but author don't have good logic, ex; Li yunmu make fake avatar named Li Yun, Li Feng. Bloody hell!!
- Mc did'n have unique character, except ret*arded decision making
- Plot that make you want to punch on author face and Li yunmu!!
Website : qidian china
Views : 1.76million
Rating : 9.3(254)
Chapters : 1000+
Status : completed
Word count : 2.20million
author level : lv5
No of works : 2
Comments : 1199
Year started : 2016
Been reading up to 8 chaps now. Quite a cool plot you got here. I like how you stick to your character designs.
Raymund only think of this as entertainment and nothing more. He's pretty laidback, not strictly driven to win the entire thing, definitely more concern about his chosen hero's 'performance', if you catch my drift. I don't particularly like him for the demeaning actions he dished to Elise, but it match with his background and current state of mind, I'll give you that.
And what I like about Elise is her believable, logical reaction to the happenings around. She wasn't an avid WN reader or RPG lovers who expect a reincarnation and casual 'you are the chosen one' situation. Hence why the need to scream and run as her initial instinct. Kudos to you.
Hopefully, you don't rush things and keep th character developments to happen slow.
Keep up the good works, author :D
Muchas gracias por traer los capítulos, espero que puedas seguir publicándolos así sean dos capítulos por día. Está ha sido una de las mejores novelas que he leído, tiene algo que te engancha, y a mi criterio no es tan monótona.
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muy bueno
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author pls come back i want moree T-T
This was a complete waste of time, and if I had to do it again I would gladly do it.
We are in a phase of explosion with people translating/writing non stop with no regard to quality, however things were not this bad when this one came out and it was one of the really good ones.
I would not recommend reading this normally on account of there not being an ending as author has passed away, but considering the level of work available today, fake reviews and manipulated ratings finding a good content to read is becoming harder and harder, so if you got the time do give this a try.
it's so beautiful I love ur book and ur story is amazing
I'm a bit stupid becoz I read the book, ranted to my friends about how good it is, but forgot to review it. *facepalm* Well u got it, this book is the perfect escape from all the usual sappy stuff u see in WN. Well not that I mind it, becoz I even read it but U know wat I mean. Thank u author-sama for writing this fanfic.
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