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I NEED A MASS RELEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE UPDATE IS TOO SLOW.!!! I WANT MORE OF THE MAIN CHARACTER LIFE STORY!!!????????????????????
Love this❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Gerald Fireborn, will he be able to return to Neloron? Will he be the one to destroy the BS Sect? Or, will the MB Sect Elders backstab/dissect him for their own gains? I want to know more! How his story will unfurl.
Not gonna lie, I'm not a huge fan of Dark themes but your story changed my point of view. The story build up had me on the edge of my seat. I loved it and I would recommend it to my friends.
the only problem i have with this is that i need more chapters, so far everyhing is lookin good........................................................
I'm in chapter 14 right now, and the story is quite good for a 15 year old like you(Cough,I'm 16 years old this year don't mind me) to write this humorous story. I will look forward of how the story will goes. Keep up the good work ?., Don't worry about the grammar or spelling error, since we can read it well.
Bana good monke good. Book good. Me go smash cock and balls with rock now. I will be given many bana for it. IT HURTS. I have made a mistake in the pursuit of bana
The spelling made it hard to read. I couldn’t continue on. You misspelled words like “Athlete” and “nurse”. I know some people have trouble spelling, but you might benefit from an editor.
nice story, but I think you should add cover to all your novels to attract more reader's Adios waiting for next chapter ✔️
A cosmic conspiracy spanning thousands of years.A story of civilizations struggling to survive.A glorious quest of discovery and redemption.All hidden under the cover of this seemingly light-hearted novel.Is this an epic? Yes, with a capital E.Is this a "slice of life" story? Also yes, You'll feel like Hao Ren is your next-door neighbour.
Just loving this novel so far alot of nice stuff and great detail,.................................... . . . . . . . . . . ..........................................................
this novel is a hidden gem.Firstly, I feel the sense of character and personality of the Mc and Even side characters are well throughout, and each behave and converse in the way one would expect them to considering their circumstances and status.And for the Second point, Although there weren't many chapter so far, the pacing and content is done very well and does leave you expecting more withought giving the sense of boredom.The novel does not feel rushed and the story moves forward in a steady but enjoyable pace.the writing quality is top-notch, with no grammar errors.love reading this novel so far.
