Prometheus_god
I just do not get it. What is wrong with people and why they always like evil MC. I hate it. I mean I understand that people do not like naive MC and I do not like MC with that kind of personality but there is a big difference between naive and nice and good guy. I discovered that during the past two years MC with evil personality are getting more popular and authors like to write this kind of story who knows what is wrong with people.
I have high expectations regarding this novel, especially coming from the author of one of my favorite novels, I will wait for more chapters to come out to finally delight myself with this delight, by the way it continues like this :D
this book starts with a suspenseful plot, the timelines differ, but the MMORPG genre is the same as that every novel... waiting for regular update...
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Generic novel with semi-retarded anime protagonist and a vain attempt at making a decent story. We get a cliche "hero" MC who befriends a cabalistic tribe that suddenly turns all goofy playful after author decides he doesn't want a serious story anymore. MC attacks Titanaboa for no reason other then to save an Ape who kidnapped him and is constantly hindering his own interests. A novel for people just trying to kill time.
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I really like the story. it's super good. although I find the system and the characters a bit annoying, I guess that's part of the plot. anyways, it starts with the preview. It's much longer than normal, and instead of one chapter it keeps going for six. the mc describes some petty drama she had to solve between rotten spoiled noble classmates that I couldn't care less for, which she has to involve herself since she's the responsible class representative. the system which is their teacher puts her on detention for trying to put out the fight instead of doing nothing, and one side character in detention goes knifey knifey, which sucks.
she essentially got killed for the teacher and his class, and now while they get to live peaceful lives as doted on children, she has to fight tooth and nails as a snake to survive and evolve.... because of a joke from the goddess. now... that's not bad, but what makes it worse is how the teacher constantly ridicules her choices... badmouths the mc, and he said something like "I don't think you're worthy of the goddess's gift" for eating too much poison to get poison resistance on a quest he gave, which makes him into a total bitch in my book. luckily the mc doesn't really takes this seriously, and she gets to live her life without feeling sorry for herself.
now. asides from that... the mc is solid. one reason I like female mcs is 'cause they tend to not go murderhobo, which is super good imo.
the mc doesn't mercilessly kills everyone to prevent having enemies... while making more enemies. instead she's smart. instead of killing she tries to use them. she finds herself with a bunch of hungry siblings that would devour each other if worse comes to worse? she doesn't eat and kill them. why not train them? she finds herself in a prison with a bunch of beasts that could become mindless drones... she doesn't eat them. why not use them to create a diversion? the mc is a good mc.
Wow! such a religious writer! She inspired readers to follow God's will and believe in his own ways nice! Give it up for you Ms. Congratulations for your journey as a writer!
Author I will give you the highest review that I can give, because not only did you write an interesting and amazing novel, but you also made me wish that, I didn't discover this novel until a year later so that I can binge read all the chapters.
Before thinking whether to read the novel or not just read the first chapter on author thought.
The storyline and plot is surprisingly detailed and the author managed to write a story where the world doesn't revolve around MC but it's not a multiple POV type story. (Good for me)
All major encounters with other characters are logical and they don't just pop out of nowhere just because the plot demands it...they are always given a little background which makes them alive and believable.... except MC's mother side of family. but I guess that will be revealed later. Side characters appear and leave logically and not because of random plot.
The story has 2-3 cliche parts but the execution and results are very different from the normal...(*spoiler- there is tournaments and mc finding rare spirit beast and a young master goes after the MC for he talked to his supposed wife/girl...but in a totally different way*)
Otherwise this story is kingdom building in a poor abandoned land...mc has his OP inheritance but doesn't use hack techniques to improve his land but simply expensive very scarce resources which any normal lord will spend only on himself. In short the kingdom building is realistic too, compared to other novels where mc is either reincarnation from future or from earth...
Another thing in novel you will find interesting is the cultivation system and the structure of cultivation world in general. the difference between different states of cultivation is not insurmountable and those in the same stages is even more so... atleast in the starting and mid stages...this makes it interesting as just having higher cultivation doesn't mean sure victory..it comes down to how good their techniques are and thier teamwork....
This is refreshing after reading so many one man army MCs...
The world-building in general is great the noble families, the commoners they act differently than the stereotype established in other novels...like nobles are oppressive and common men are miserable and only the mc saves them and they will grateful to eternity.
well that's it ..I ranted a lot .... author keep up the good work, I generally don't start reading new novels unless they have 300+ chapters coz this site has given me many heartbreaks but I changed my mind after reading your first chapter so don't you dare disappoint me by dropping it.
