There is no cover, why is there no cover! Anyway, I read it and it seems to be kind of action packed. However, there is not enough chapters! Moar! needs 140 characters... 140 140 140.
A unique cultivation novel and better than most generic ones. Easy to read, not that many grammar errors, and an interesting protagonist to follow is the equation for a good novel. Keep it up, Author LOABA! >3
The term evil differs with what the society constitutes as evil and it differs from one society to another. What one considers as good may be bad for another. Personaly i dont find the mc to be " evil " but he sure is stupid as f**k. The mc is protrayed to have millions of years of experience in his previous life. So even if the mc is born with an iq of 20, with accordance to his lifespan he should have considerable amount of intelligence by the time his age hit 1million. Yet the MC in his second life is completely acting without prudence and common sense !!. Patience, wisdom, intelligence, cunningness, disregard of life, prudence, serenity, presence of mind, sense of self are some characteristics that could develop wr to time. The MC had Time, lots of it. Yet he lacks the qualities that corresponds to his claimed "hundred million years of life experience ". Mr.Author, i dont know if my ramblings would hurt you. But, kindly take my review in to consideration when u create a story like this. I dont find many faults except character design.
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En one side yaru illa nee than - unnala naa pala naal stomach valikka sirichi irukka. - nee different ta thericha - unna yaru kudayume compare panna mudiyathu - athan un plus
Hello guys the author here, thank you for reading this novel although english is not my forte i'll try my best, if there is a spelling error or an idea that you have you can put it down in the comment.it will be fun having a conversation with you guys regarding the plot.Likewise please vote and support me, thank you
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ok, new work let's enjoy, and see how good this story is...I hope as a reader from Indonesia, there will be many interesting things for me, ok continue thor.....
I love intriguing stories and the author has clearly put a LOT of thought into writing this novel. The most interesting thing about this is that the build-up to the tension actually asks more questions than answers and I am hungry for more. Cheers and I look forward to reading the next chapters!
Chapters r too short. Had it been written by Mrdojo(writer of the original webnovels 'The 7 Realms' and 'The Necromancer system') this novel would have been finished within 80-85 chapters.Also the grammar isn't that appealing. And for those ppl who keep saying - 'Thos novel is trash. I dropped it after 3/4 chapters.' well, that's your fault. Most novels start their stories after a few chapters. This is one of them. It's not the best novel but certainly not the worst either (if we not bother too much abt grammar which is the problem with most webnovels on this site?)Lastly, this is more of a 'narration' type novel. They tend to forecast future happenings(which r already obvious to readers. Such as - MC will become a powerhouse. Or as, he will marry a beauty).
This is one of the first webnovels O read but its the best so far, I dont know why its not in top 20
I don't even know where I start with the numerous problems this novel has.Firstly if the MC happened to step on a cockroach the next 5 chapters would be about the cockroach's illustrious family line the has connections to royalty and super duper grand mages and how they and the whole continent are now hunting the MC.This situation repeats it self 2 or 3 times in the first 40 chapters.Next would be the MC's iq as it starts at decent level and every chapter it drops a little.Now 40 chapters later the MC can barely form coherent thoughts, he just stumbles and plot armors his way through the story.With one girl even more lacking in iq than the MC blindly following for no reason at all and another girl that is plot armor in character form.I could literary write an essay on this novels shortcomings and not even list all that appear in the first 40 chapters.I am sincerely in awe by the people managing to reach this far into the story without asking a salary to read this "novel".If I could I would rate the story lower but I wouldn't be honest as the stability of updates and translation quality manage to add another star to this horrid story.