A good story and very acceptable as a start.The development of the hero is very noticeable, at least the hero is not stupidIt is better than most of the novels on the platform. I expect a lot from you
typical story MC gets looked down upon the whole time they make sure that every reason for him to be looked down upon is there I'm honestly sick of the same stories over and over with different names
good book i enjoy reading definitely recommended to others .
Romance ?Wanted to know if you plan to have a love interest for the mc
I’ll be honest, I was blown away by the gap in quality between this novel and most others on this platform. The setting is similar to many other stories, but the world seems very well fleshed-out, much more than I expected.The story has progressed at a decent pace, not too fast, not too slow. The progression is logical, with the system not hogging the spotlight the whole time. It is his primary method of growing stronger, but it’s limited use has let the world and the characters take center-stage enough to make the story interesting.The writing quality is very well done. It’s probably the best quality the story has, and that’s saying a lot considering how good the rest of it is. The characters are good. The dialogue is well done, and their personalities are consistent with their actions most of the time. A bit more detail would be nice, but this review is at chapter 100, and I can tell there’s a lot more coming yet.I can’t say much for the update speed, since I binge-read all 100 chapters in a day, so I suppose I can tell you it’s not fast enough. This is the kind of author you want to kidnap and keep in your basement(with all love and respect ❤️).All in all, I really like this story and can’t wait to see where it goes. I hope it holds up to my expectations.
A very well put together, enjoyable and amazing story. The first arc is a little slow and sets things up but by the second arc I was enraptured. The characters all fill a role and have a purpose, the setting seems like it has a lot of lore that’s going on and the style of writing flows smoothly. The callbacks and mystery is seeded in well, that in the later chapters you can pretty much see the plan unfold. I especially love how it handles the characters’ issues like suicide, momentary depressions and self-harm. The combination of how these characters interact with each other makes you care for them on a personal level and when faced with the main problem, they stay strong because they all depend on each other. Truly a wonderful story and the ending of the second arc is amazing is all I can say and I’ve been following it for a while. I can’t wait for what’s planned in the third arc.
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