"Actually... that is not a bad idea! I could achieve that." Theo's eyes lit up with excitement. Already picturing all the tribes panicking after his tricks filled him with delight. Waiting until the dead of night, Theo finally rushed out towards the Hargraven territory first. Finding the Charflys, he shouted out a bunch of random clicking noises. In a panic, the Charflys all heard him and buzzed off to warn the Hargravens. Before long the fires of every tribe were ignited as they all prepared to charge out and meet the Cidian Bears and company. Snickering to himself in the dark, Theo flashed off like a bolt of lightning towards the other side. Skulking around, he soon found himself at the Murs territory. As a rodent species, their language was more familiar for him and thus easier to fake. Screeching out a bunch of frightened squeaks, Theo set off the alarm in the tribe. Subsequent screeching and squeaking exploded throughout the tribe and spread off towards all the surrounding tribes. Thrown into disarray, they gathered themselves and prepared to rush out and fight with the Hargravens.
Chi looked over her work before releasing a deep sigh of relief.
"Is anyone sitting here?" came a voice from beside me. I shook my head.
Staring at one another, there existed an awkward silence between them as Cai Lin and Joel tried to process what Xiao Han had said. This was a scenario they did not wish to see as they did not want Rong Wen to be involved in this life. They had first handed seen and felt what it was to fight unnatural beings and how the government treated them. In most cases, captured beings would be subjected to torture for info and many other inhuman treatments. To them this was just cold-blooded and felt disgusted at it. But what could they do? They chose this lifestyle to live on, to them Rong Wen was also one of the main reasons as to why they wish to live on.
Its a story told from a first-person perspective, you could feel that the story pace is slow. World building needs to be improved, i could not envision the setting that is being portrayed throughout the story. The battle scenes were fairly average but the character development and the character's relationship was well-read for me. I would say in overalls, this novel could be improved. Once it does, it will be golden..
I think the story is somewhat very not bad
I love this novel, it is short but it is shaping out to be a very interesting story, I also recommend to the writer to show the thoughts of the characters but that's about it good luck.
One of favorite novels on this site(I originally found it on scribblehub) I been loving it so far. I really like all the characters especially the Mc Keith and the interactions between each other, the only thing that I would like to see change is the pace to speed up a little bit but it's still early in the novel so hopefully it will. #Vanessa's-best-girl
love this book I would never have guess Joshua had such power this book has a real good twist to its title ?it's like watching twighlight and the series Lucifer combined outstanding?????
Do not waste your time. Typical waste MC you have read many times before with similar plots and schemes. I am over it. How can Chinese people read the same thing over and over again. A repetition just small minor changes. This is only good enough for new arrivals reading light novels.
Hi author here with a shameless review.I want to say several things, so let's go slowly.About the writing quality, I'm going to be honest here, it's not the best and isn't near since I'm not that good at English, but I'm trying, so bear with it until either I get better or I can pay a grammar checker.The story development, I'm trying to make it slow, not too much, but slow, so I don't know how that will end.The character design, it gets better (I think) around the chapter 11, so if you can pass the first ones, it will improve (a little, don't know in the future how it will be).The updating stability, I'm gonna be straight honest, it's awful. Since I'm a student with a quite strict school, I have lots of exams, so I have to study, and also this is a hobby, so I have other priorities. If you can understand that, I thank you, if you can't, I can't do nothing about it.And finally, the world background, there isn't too much right now, and probably it won't be too complex in the future, since I'm very clueless.If after all that negative things I said about my book (I now realize this doesn't help at all) you still want to read it and actually read it, I welcome you to this adventure that I don't know where will take us.(Pss, also join the discord, so we can chat and hear me ramble.)
Do you remember those moments in between classes or after school with your friends?A serial series of a bunch of friends just being boys. It's episodic and more than a little random. The grammar and writing style isn't the best, not at all. But it's fun and gives you a bit of nostalgia for your own wacky youth. Fantasy, romance, adventure and such novels are more popular on this site but we shouldn't dismiss these sorts of silly relaxing things. Thank you for all the little smiles author.