Good book but takes to long to update, but I have no right to talk.
This 5 star is based on this writers other books. Great flow. Great story and an MC worthy of your time.
Overall I actually enjoyed parts of the story. I hope this one continues to release new chapters. I wanna see more of how his shut in lifestyle affects his journey through the new apocalyptic world with the zombies.
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First, let me say that my reviews of any book I do may seem harsh. They are meant help guide growth. However this author is by all accounts better than most on this site that I’ve had the chance to read. Although not a lot is known about the background of the “world(s)” the characters are developed to the point you feel invested in what happens to them. The author may not be the most stable of releasers, but he releases frequently and is trying to properly balance life and art. This is always a challenge for young authors and he deserves respect for trying to make sure the quality of his work doesn’t drop.
I anticipate and expect great things to follow as LamenThief grows alongside his story. You would be wise to join before too many chapters pile up in front of you.
Quoting the title I'm really looking forward for the story to justifiably fit tp that. Talking about the plotline it's for the fantasy lovers who wants the fusion of action. The actionscript is really compelling along with the world background matched to it. The error lies with the punctuations as there aren't any stops or pauses to indicate the structural analysis of the story. Yet it's readability is fine with the good vocabulary. ❤
So I think the idea that this story is about is interesting (that's what got me into this) but I read the first 3 chapters and I'm pretty sure I can say that while the idea is interesting, the character designs are pretty bad, things seem quite forced and just appear out of nowhere, the grammar is horrible and you can barely tell what is going on throughout the chapters. The story also doesnt really explain why things happen and that it just happens randomly causing quite a lot of people to be confused. Hopefully things are more smooth in the latter chapters, and I recommend the author to re-edit the first few chapters because it actually doesnt make sense. Read at your own risk
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The story is like every other xanxia. Same underestimated mc, weak to strong, etc. The writing is terrible. Need editing. For example, it take 10 paragraphs to describe something that could be done in 1 or 2. Very wordy, repetitive, bad grammar, run on sentences, typos and wrong choice of words (vocabulary).I had to drop this after a dozen chapters.
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it is really a pity that the story does not continue. it had a lot of potential and so far the story has gone well and I liked it a lot. I hope reading the various comments in your story would continue it because it was really good
the gender has been confused a lot the master(girl) why is she called junior uncle?! i remember mc mentioning she has a valiant air but all other charecters talk to her like shes a man?