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It's good but I think it can be better if the story is a bit fast It's a little slow for my taste or the chapters could be a bit longer Whatever works
good please keep up to pace and plz keep writing. ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I don't usually read ML novels, but this is definitely one of the best. I like how the characters were created and the world background is very excellent. Overall, it's 10/10.
Shameless Author time! I believe that I've set up a better premise, character and overall power system with this one so I hope all of you fine readers will give this book a try! It's my third book so there is still lots to learn! Ty for your patience
At first I started to read it to kill time but as the other characters introduced i was so hooked in the story that I binge read almost all chapters in one week and I love it you should definitely give it time and read it with patience up to 50chapter then you will know it's worth
Story is well written with few fillers, but its weakness is MC who is hypocrite , guillable , patsy and tbh dumb. He saves random youths even without knowing if he would be able to kill those beasts( he has been mistreated his whole life and bullied so his feelings in a dog eat dog world make no sense), ends up trusting a family enough to show his eyes , even after being warned by someone few minutes ago , which he known for no more than for few minutes . He knows he is an extra but still thinks them of as family, naively tells his discovery to his teacher which he should not and tries some experiment on his second soul bond while he could have waited to find one with better potential.... Taking undue risk.
At the end , someone like him wouldn't survive in real world, and his actions scream plot armour
Author says it again and again that he is mature but in reality he is emotional mess without much rationality to back his actions. Read but don't waste your spirit stones or pass on it as his character growth stops at chapter 10.
ALERT! Beta Mc and stupid MC!
DO NOT READ THIS LEVEL IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO FEEL ANGER BECAUSE OF AN MC WITH BRAIN OF DINOSAUR.
ALERT! Beta Mc and stupid MC!
DO NOT READ THIS LEVEL IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO FEEL ANGER BECAUSE OF AN MC WITH BRAIN OF DINOSAUR.
ALERT! Beta Mc and stupid MC!
DO NOT READ THIS LEVEL IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO FEEL ANGER BECAUSE OF AN MC WITH BRAIN OF DINOSAUR.
nothing to say, this story has drama, action, romance, whatever you think of and is also based on cultivation. Now it has a tv show called ubtaned and an anime called grandmaster of demonic cultivation made about it. one of the best stories.
really bad grammar, not creative at all...
why the hell is this so high rated??? I am pretty sure there should be better stuff in the top 20???
I can't believe it didn't get selected seems like my only option to learn CN [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Story development was slightly faster than I preferred, other than that, the wasy the autor described the characters and his world building was honestly some of the best I’ve read in a while. 9/10 would recommend.