Now this is simply a masterpiece not because of title or parody but through its quality and story.i mean it deserve a top ranking no doubt.♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
I'm simply intrested because the protagonist is MALE. I'm tired of female protagonists. GIVE ME A SHAMELESS MC. AHHHHH! ALL HAIL THE MALE SHAMELESS PROTAGONISTS.
Like all stories of this type, there are major flaws. The problem I see is the constant reality bending nature of the system that is created. If a system has to bend reality constantly then there is going to be millions of little changes occurring each time it does something. Personally I think it is better for the system just to be creating items out of nothing than go the whole reality change route. These novels can be fun for a few chapters, but those of us who like to think more deeply about things will be looking at this type of story as if there are a bunch of problems that just get more irritating as things go on.
Hi I just finished reading all the chapters that you posted and you left me wanting more and more ! so when I realize that such masterpiece didn’t have a review I was shocked! So I’m here to show my appreciation to your work ! Please continue with your hard work ! That being said... Writing Quality: it’s pretty good, I didn’t notice any big mistakes in your grammar. For me it was very fluid, I read all 40 chapters in one go and I never felt tired ! I enjoyed reading it and that’s the most important thing for me. Updating Stability: I can't say much about it, so I’ll trust you and give you 5 stars. Please continue to update frequently! Story Development: I say it’s a good rhythm, not so slow but not so fast, until now you pretty much followed the original rhythm of the manga which is good for me. Although I felt like the MC should do more physical training, like sparing with tang or something like that, for what you write it seems that he just do some heavy work out and meditate but that alone doesn’t give him experience on real battle. Until now that wasn’t a problem because he never encountered anyone who was stronger than him in real fight ( I’m not counting the exam to enter Shrek Academy, because if the professor had take it seriously, Joy would lose ). Other than that I notice that the MC try hard to not change the original events, which I can understand, but that can become very boring in the future, until now that’s not a problem because it still just in the beginning of the plot. Overall I’m loving it ! Character Design: I have nothing to say about it, l pretty much see him as Aizen before betraying Soul Society, I didn’t paid too much attention to his description so I can’t say much, I’m sorry ! World Background: I recently started reading Doulou Dalu, I didn’t finished so I can say much. However I thought it was clever the idea of using the infinity stones as material soul ! MCU it’s not my forte, although I watched the movies I was never a die hard fan of the comics. For now that’s all I can give you, I’ll do another review in the future. I hope it was helpful!I’m sorry I can’t give you a more detailed review, I’m usually to shy to Write anything, this is my first review ever T^T Obs: please take in consideration that English it’s not my native language so I apologize for any mistakes
Why am I allowed to rate my own story? Of course, I'm gonna be a biased prick and give myself all fives? Screw fair play! I'm in this for the long run! Here's a 1
I hope this novel will enter the top ranking fasttttt, OP MC, and it looks like there's no harem too, what else do you want to expect from this? Btw, how did I find this novel? Lol, I was just scrolling casually in my boredom, then I unexpectedly found it.
Farm novels for life! While not much focus has been put on farming so far I still hold out hope and the story isn't bad its a bit of a refreshing change of pace.
Tbh I think this novel is way too underrated... I love how unique is our mc personality the most. He may looks like a cinnamon roll but~~~~. I also like the side characters that also play an important roles to make the novel looks more unique and interesting... Cant wait to read about our mc and side characters backstory~~ Oh yeah! Will this novel have a lil bit of romance or it will only have mystery and actions? I asking this because well i kind of ship our mc with that computer genius ⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄ I hope there will be a romance even though it was slow paced one ??
Ah, as the current number 1 ranked book on the Chinese website, this should be interesting. Of course, keep in mind that this is around Halloween too. I'm not worried about the quality of the translation or the stability of the updates. The translator, LonelyTree, can single-handedly cause webnovel to go bankrupt, because all he does is breathe and eat translations. If they have to pay him in full before any books get published for readers out there, he'll clean them out first. I kid you not, he even poo** out translations. With such single-minded dedication and focus, and combined with the fact that Millman is editing this piece of work, we should be in for a fast and steady ride. As far as chapter 1 is concerned, the goals and motivations of the main character is clear early on. Though we don't know much about his character, we know that he sticks for those who are on his side, and that he's a sentimental person. He holds on to whatever remnants he has left of those dear to him, and tries his best to keep onto those memories. Little is known about this world yet, except that it's located in a place like modern-day earth. Cell phones exists. There's an app. Haunted houses, surveillance cameras, lightbulbs, and the likes. If it looks like Earth, smells of earth, and has an uncle who comes around trying to collect debts, it probably is on Earth. But... there's now a twist. The twist is this House of Horrors. Lets go into a little bit about the main character: Due to his parent's mobile Haunted House business, Chen Ge traveled quite a bit when he was young. When kids were playing with blocks, he had fake human heads. Doesn't that sound like a lovely childhood? Half a year ago, Chen Ge lost his parents. Now, I may have missed about how old he was, but I don't think it was mentioned. All we know is that he has gone to college, something logically-structured base, like Engineering and Toy Design. Like, he couldn't find them anymore—they mysteriously disappeared in the middle of an abandoned hospital. What were they doing out there? Why did they disappear? With nothing left behind except for a cellular phone, a doll, and their haunted house, Chen Ge came and took over the now-ownerless haunted house. Right as his business is about to go under, he discovers that he can view the 'house's status' and that the house can issue 'daily quests'. How's this story going to turn out? What kind of quests were issued to his parents and why would they disappear? Is this going to be a "cultivate your house" system? What kind of scary scenes are going to show up? Would those scenes end up being illusory? Or would they be actually enacted in real life with the "customers"? Beats me. I've only read chapter 1. Lets find out together.
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A perfect description of a great story, more ink to your pen author
The world-building in these chapters is quietly brilliant. I love how the author doesn't just tell us this is a factory town in what seems like 1980s China—they show us through the smallest details. The workers wearing uniforms or old clothes they don't mind getting dirty, except for Liu Ming who shows up in a 'crisp white shirt, jeans, and polished leather shoes.' That one detail tells us everything about his character AND the social dynamics of this place. Then there's the textile factory itself—the cotton carding machines, the yarn-spinning section with girls in hygiene caps and white aprons, the second-floor office where Cheng Hao watches from the window. The author really makes you feel the humidity and noise of a working factory. And Dai Qing's home life! She washes her bedding, hangs it in the courtyard to dry, makes egg soup, boils chrysanthemum tea, sits under a grapevine trellis reading a book. These aren't just filler moments—they ground the story in a specific time and place. The bus ride, the ten-minute walk home, the mosquito net, the small alarm clock pointing to 9:00 AM. Every detail places us firmly in this world. Even the security office scene has atmosphere—the bruised faces, the awkward negotiations, the way Yan Biao reads the room. This isn't a generic backdrop; it's a living, breathing environment where every character has their place. The factory isn't just a workplace; it's a microcosm of society with its own hierarchies, gossip networks, and unspoken rules.