The writing quality is mostly good, very little mistakes and the reading flows well.
Characters development so far is good, I appreciate the details some of the minor characters have. Though I don't really see too much original thought in the characters they are plenty good enough. I enjoy reading about all of them.
World building so far is adequate as it is just the first 20 chapters.
Great story with an original concept though I can forsee issues in the future with creating movies for the MC to act in I think it will be interesting to follow. Love it so far.
Updates are somewhat stable, hope for more as always.
Written at Chapter 21
It was great the plot the motivation it has inspired in me is amazing I love it I read more then a hundred books a day and this is by far my favorite
Fantastic novel. A guy from earth that turns into a god, but makes a system for his followers to use. Makes his followers lives a game. It's very similar to gamers of the underworld.
Interesting story. I love the family bond and Hei being the dutiful big bro. I don't know cultivation or generally read it, so this was new to me. The story isn't guns blazing, but the pace is logical and flows well. Well written with interesting characters. Could do really well here.
Owaaaa so interesting I love this novel so far! It seems like a light hearted rebirth into VRMMORPG game while it also has some dark elements mixed in. MC is a mad scientist but it’s awesome to see his amazing feats so far into the game.
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I'm just going to drop a review from novel updates by someone One of those standard xuanhuans poorly disguised as something else, in this case as Sci-fi, and full of plot/worldbuilding holes because of it.The premise is overly convoluted, bear with me: MC is from a tech world with Mechas and interstelar spaceships. There was a VR game that took ppl to a cultivation world being invaded by demons, but it's not a game but another reality. After the cultivation world is destroyed it was the MC world's turn. Still following? It's not over yet. Anyways, ppl in the Mecha world logged into the cultivation world with a system to help in the battle agaisnt demons. In the end they lost, but the MC got back in time with a War God System which is basically a cheat, because... bah, who knows.... 'god did it', probably. For some reason, only he can access the 'game' right now even though it wasn't 'launched' and go to and from these two realities every day.So, Cultivator vs Mechas vs Demons while the time traveler MC pings between realities every few days. Ok, a little too much at the beginning but sounds cool. There's also Professionalist (another word for cultivators) in the Mecha world, but let's ignore that for now.Eventually you'll see technology sucks and Mechas are being destroyed by a bow and arrow or a bone spear, all because 'cultivation energy'. Guns don't exist and don't work just because, missiles also don't exist even when intergalatic travel already does and in summary, the author doesn't know sh*t about modern warfare or technology, nor he developed his own fantasy version properly.I was raging when a few chapter after a Mecha, with the greatest technology available, a more than 1 ton hunk of hardened steel, was cleaved in half by a bone spear, but the MC get's a thin golden armor that takes several hits of demons without breaking. Why? Because 'cultivation energy'. Nitpicking or bad worldbuilding, I'll let you decide. But know that the author doesn't bother to create a special alloy or element that would explain why thick plates of steel are tofu and the thin golden armor is virtually indestructible. He just says 'because cultivators'.In the end, it's all about the MC in the cultivator world eating pills, killing stuff and leveling up. Kill a monster and gain xp/soul points, get that super cool manual to be strong, go to sect competitions, sword enlighment (even though there's a system) etc. Then he comes to his reality with all his cool powers and slap faces, save people and collect beauties. Yes, there are plenty of cocky young masters showing hate for no reason only to be bit*h slapped and come back with family reinforcements.As for the Professionalists in the Mecha world, they are more powerful than Mechas and aircrafts as well, why? Not explained either, except that they are 'noob cultivators' that don't understand 'energy' and while some ppl are born with it, most aren't.This doesn't deserve the current high ratings at all. I'd give this a 3 instead of 1 otherwise, since even though is generic with awful worldbuilding and power systems, the pacing is good and there's always something happening at all times. The Author manages to create good ******* and characters but usually blows it up with the plot/worldbuilding holes.I liked most of the female character so far as well, except for the first Su something that is bland, but insteresting female characters in these kind of novels was a good surprise, even though they all love the MC for plot reasons.Anyways, I wrote this for those who, like me, got into this novel thinking it would be an original idea. It's not. This is generic cultivation overpowering technology and demons. The cultivators powers are vast and reality bending, to the point that it becomes anything the author wants at that particular time. There is no proper 'power system' even though cultivation power is used to solve most problems, which broke the novel apart for me. That and the usual young masters, harem, plot armor cliches, of course.Let me just add that the reason I mention Mechas so much is because the Author spent the first dozen chapters foreshadowing it: The MC was a god level engineer that would revolutionze the current tech of the world, going to a Mecha related school, working at a Mecha factory, etc. He even built a super Mecha for love interest #1 and gained infinite money because of it. Then suddenly the Author must've thought "I can't write about Mechas... f*ck it, they all tr*sh now. Any move with 'energy' can blow them up!" and it became all about cultivation. There was too much preparation for suddenly not mentioning them at all.
thanks for your hard work so keep up with new chapters and updates of your great work.Hope you don't drop this story and also update and post new chapters for ALL of Your SSTORIES.
Whiting quality is not that great but the story and how the world and gods were made was interesting ? I'll rate this a 4.7-4.8 stars and one power stone
Good things about this novel.- Amazing world-building.- Amazing main character personality.- The power balance is nice and progressive.- If you like long chapters, this is the novel for you.Bad things about this novel.- If you don't like long chapters, this isn't for you.- The novel is one of the author's first works and you can still see some immatureness, but it's still well-written.Thanks for reading, I don't make many reviews but I hope you can make the correct choice for this novel.Read my novels too :)
now let me is this story a copy from my favorite novel common you have not even changed the title. and have no one noticed it yet ? and webnovel is nothing going to do?
It is good the story and the plot is not too much and easy to digest and also the mc is cool more chapters plssss it is so good pls add more chapters i am addicted to this.