A good start, I enjoyed it. I added it to my collections. I'm hurt after each chapter, I'm becoming hysterical! Congratulations to the author, you chose your genre well, it's a good story
The story is decent but the author just rewords the same thing in different ways and repeats whole scenes from different prospectives with almost no changes on how the scene is perceived. Which just makes you feel like you’re constantly reading filler and makes the story progress come to a snails pace. 90 chapters in and he just face slapped 2 women from his past (in the progress of a 3rd) with 0 progress forward yet and 0 new encounters or connections. This story has a lot of potential but im hopping off this train here.
why is this book unavailable????!??????????
It's a really fun read. It's pretty dark though, which I'm glad of. I was pretty sick of all the bleeding heart MC's of other books I've read, who always end up being screwed over and keep being nice and giving in, so this is a breath of fresh air!Hattie is my new favourite fmc, what a little baddie she is. ?
I’ve read your novel, and it’s amazing! The world you’ve created is so detailed and pulls the reader in completely. The characters are really well written, each with their own personality and depth that make them feel real. This novel is truly excellent and shows your talent so well!I’m a passionate Commissioned based digital comic artist with a knack for crafting immersive worlds and dynamic characters. My expertise lies in creating custom, high quality comic art.I will offer budget friendly prices and discounts . I also have been transform a script inspired by your story .Let’s collaborate to make your vision a reality. and I’d love to discuss your project. My work is Available on X and on Linktree and on Deviantart . further. Feel free to contact me on discord:emily_jamess_ . Hoping for a positive response .Thanks
It's good. I honestly did not thought it would be this good since the synopsis is not very attractive. I only was suppose to read a few chapters to see if it's a good story. Although it is
Did you dropped this novel? IMO it was going great. Huge shame ?
Lovin the good read, saw all y'er posts on ifunny and finally decided to join in. I love the characters, same with the story-telling and world-building. Can't wait for more releases, y'er killin it.
Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
wow ? great story but it has few chapters
as follow indian, i related this story, But I like adventure in astra more, as I more of a pervert. Anyway, this is free review, hope you successed.
Good novel with 2 chapters a month... What a waste of time...