I very much do enjoy the writing of this, and as a big fan of fun fantasy and isekai (also fox women) i am a biased enjoyer of your work, cant wait for your updates!- huntressbacchhae
A fiction about a football manager trying to resurrect a fallen football giant,Nottingham Forest. This book about Tony Dunn/ Tony Twain is really relaxing to read as far as I remembered. Characters development is kinda okay. Plot Twists and imaginary players blended well with well known football stars.
MC is really lovable, a fun guy. Most of the plots are intense and interesting. (MC is reincarnated to the past btw)
At first,MC didn't know anything about actually managing club other than former experience of the host body and his FM experience .
But he knows one thing. About which players will be stars in the futures!
Disclaimer- review made at chapter 200
Pretty good so far. Doesn't excel at anything in particular, but very solid in every aspect.
writing quality: 4*
Good. I mean, there's not much more to say. No glaring issues, decent VSPaG. Not mind-blowing enough for 5 stars, but more than enough for a Webnovel.
Story development: 4*
Excellent so far. Relatively slow paced, but always interesting and has an overarching plot that is starting to come into play now.
Character design: 4*
This is a weird one. Sometimes the characters are weird and behave slightly awkwardly compared to previously, while other times I (mentally) squeal in delight due to a surprising but great decision to add a new dimension to a character or give them a closure that they need in a story like this. Overall though, the reason the book scores well despite its inconsistencies is the linking of characters we met previously with new plot points, which works superbly. The obvious example is the MC discovering his new body's past, but other examples include the village leader and the dungeon, as well as one of the MC's quests with the first person he meets after his "reincarnation".
updating stability: 5*
Honestly just great. I give big props to anyone that can consistently release a chapter a day every day of the week, and doubling that just impresses me further.
World background: 4*
This is 4* due to the story still being in its nascent stages. What we have seen so far is pretty standard, but interesting nonetheless. We have the growing village, the nearby biomes and other villages leading to a few larger towns, and then a capital city further away with currently unknown expanses on the way. Politically, we know of the crown and the larger families plus a small insight into some of their allies and enemies. At the moment, the monsters are quite underdeveloped background-wise, to the point some readers questioned the morality of killing them, but I at least trust the author has a plan in this aspect.
Overall, great read, and I recommend it so far if this genre is your sort of thing. I will try to answer any questions people may have if I see them, and sorry if my review seems too surface-level; in actuality I'm mainly doing this to get to 10 reviews for level for of the comment badge.
The MC gets extremely emotional while fishing. Like, he will be pulling one up while yelling "I can't be a man if I don't get this fish!" "Either this fish dies or I die!" "I won't loose!" It gets weird.
That's what I liked about the novel. Everything else sucked. Just endless "hiding my true cultivation" nonsense.
READ IT.....NO BULLSHIT just READ IT !!! it will be your DRUG!!
the MC is not a BLOCKHEAD with an 8yo syndrome here.
the COMEDY is GOLD
the Story is DIAMOND
the Action is JADE
THE COMEDY IS GOLD 2x
yes it's a harem
the story was decent with interesting concepts but after like chapter 40 the translation quality turns into mtl level
it was ok first 40 episodes. then when it starts taking your money, everything turns into mtl. so save your money, and just read mtl outside webnovel. :)
This is very good keep up the good work can't wait for more chapters to come out....
Has the translator dropped this or is he on some sort of break?
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I haven't started reading it yet but I have a question is this a harem ..?
Writing quality sub-par
Still not updated after 4 month
Story development is mostly smooth.
I have to say character design 6/10
Not much of the world background is written.
But still, this novel has great prospects if written carefully.
Add more dialogue between characters, It feels like I am reading the report to the point. More dialogue will add humor to the story.
A good novel has good humor, and a good writer has great comedy.
This is good. Your hate makes you stronger!