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This is an incredibly well made novel so far. The characters feel real and are consistent, the world feels large and mysterious and most importantly, it is a fun read.
When I first read the synopsis and the so-called 'Doever Writing Quality Guarantee', I was taken aback. This author has quite the confidence, borderline arrogance, to publicly state such a thing, and in a synopsis no less! But as I read this novel, and got immersed in it, I realized that such confidence was not unsubstantiated. The grammar, vocabulary, lack of plot holes, and great immersive storytelling made me slowly fall in love. I see most of the novels on this platform as fast food. Most are just cheap and quickly made, just to scratch the itch of the reader and nothing more. This novel is like Five Guys. This is some gourmet burger stuff. I think about it even in my sleep. Like the Author's review says, the system element in this novel fits perfectly in the story's settings. Everything so far makes sense. All the potential questions I've had were answered, and I leave every chapter feeling happy and fulfilled. Every chapter fills me with wondrous world-building and I am oftentimes awed by how big the world is and I am often excited by the prospect of our scary alien friend assimilating it all into the Collective. The chapters are also nice and long. Like Lord of the Mysteries long. It's a huge treat compared to the average novel where they just give the minimum amount of words necessary to make Webnovel and the algorithm happy.My only worry is that this author has another large novel that he's working on. It's currently on hold for this novel because he wants to win the competition. Because of the high word count and the effort that goes into maintaining such a quality of work, I am often scared by the idea that the frequency of chapters will fall. Especially when he inevitably resumes working on his other novel.In conclusion, TL;DR, read this novel, cherish it, and treat it like you would treat your cute 2D anime waifu. With love. I love this novel almost as much as I love her.... almost.
I love the different aspects of it and the game aspect is really interesting and I love this novel because it leaves me wanting for more. Love this and great work author
Writing quality is terrible no proof reading was done and the english in the novel is horrible worse than a translator. The story develop ment is trash because author is a lazy writer for example “I was betrayed by my best friend and he knows everything about me.” Like what is that. Suxh lazy writing no build up, no climax, no story telling, no nothing. All the characters are bland and cliche author didnt put any originality into this book at all. The poor background can be attributed to authors lazy writing and lack of detail. All in all it feels like a 10 year old writing a book and to be honest it is terrible.
it's good book to read if you like MMORPG GENRA.good story nice character overall okay writing background little lacking but in total it's worth reading
The few errors noted were a slight hindrance to the reading fun but the story is great. Check out The Christmas Darling!
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Ignore the tags, only the system one is real, there is no harem, yaoi, weak mc, ntr, or (at least to my knowledge) any plagiarism.This is a world designed solely by the author, and all the characters (well, those that matter) are likable; the grammar is rarely incorrect and the story is quite enjoyable.Those tags are just fake and leave me wondering who wastes their time vandalising someone else's hard work ?.
I hope that this will be chosen.Idk if it will but I really hope it will.I actually think this.It's absolutely true that this is what I think
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Hi, author of MPEESD here.This is my first time ever writing a novel so even I am not sure how things will go.Tbh, I hate writing essays for assignments, but writing this story was surprisingly an enjoyable experience for me.Anyway, I hope you readers will enjoy the story and hopefully provide some feedback so I that can improve the novel.-ForbiddenArchive