good story !!! At the begining the MC is ruthless...I LIKE IT ....may the author can keep up with the story and won't change this side of the MC . goog luck and keep working !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Before anything, i just want to say that this novel is, as TheLordOfOrcs said, surprisingly well written.With that out of the way, i want to say that i just found this novel by accident, and man, it was a fortunate accident.I came with little to no expectations but i found myself reading all of it , even though the supernatural, which was the main thing i came for, has yet to appear in the book.I can't say that you will surely like it, but you can give it a try.
This story is so good! I’ve only started and I just want more! Good job!
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great story-line ..looking forward for some more amazing stuff... the personality of the main character was weird , however i like it . i would rate it with five stars because the story is pretty unique and amazing . keep it up and upload more chapters asap *saranghae*
This story is getting a reboot with a third person perspective and a new storyThe name of the reboot is Alight-A SupernaturalIt will contain new characters which are obviously not so many as this storyI have improved what was wrong with Naturals and put it in Alight Hope you check it out
Author here, Rating my novel to a just. story might progress slowly to build up his world, to nonesense chapters and into something worth reading, bare with me.. as for commenting, I won't be working the novel towards the readers suggestions, just a heads up
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Dropped at Chapter 133.The novel has an amazing start, with the author making good use of many cliches and ideas. I can say that I was completely hooked by this novel until the MC and trupe returned to their academy... after that, I felt as if every good part was gone.The MC never tries to learn or do what he needs for that moment, always resulting in "Oh, if only I knew this~" or "If only I prepared myself". His emotional state is a total inconsistency, with him acting like a nervous child in scholar events despite his mental age and maturity displayed in past events, including close-ins with death.He is a total push-over of the plot, if the plot needs this, then it will happen even if the world itself becomes a total joke, full of laziness and retards.The characters are rather interesting, but the author seems to fear putting them in the splot-light so don't expect any kind of great development in less than 100~200 chapters.The world is... what I can say, extremely vague and messed. We have the factions and the mortals (common humans), but despite having numerous chance of gathering more information that would save their lives, they focus their times on the things forced by the plot.In resume, an excellent story with a very interesting beginning, but that wasn't properly developed, resulting in the plot being forced time and time again.
worst ? of all novel I have read?basically there's nothing in this novel. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
when did it become a Chinese novel..........
Reason to Read This Novel? the author. Author Avans wrote three amazing story so i am optimist this one will be great as well. All the Best with the New Novel. Cant Wait