I hope everyone enjoys this novel, I only started working on it a few months ago when I truly started learning how to write in english. So, it still needs a lot of editing, each chapter takes about 3 to 4 hours to record and 3 more to edit. I'll try to post more regularly. For now I'll try to write 5 chapters a week and as long as I'm better at my writing, I'll post more.[From the way I want to write, I'm going to finish by the end of December, if nothing happens.]
I was able to read eight chapters so far and here is my review:It has an amazing plot. The introduction was able to grab my attention. The looks of the characters are easy to portray since they are detailed. I could also convey their emotions and character interaction is great as well. The novel is not the cliche type since I was captivated to read further with no typos or errors found when it comes to vocabulary. It was an excellent read and I didn't get bored when reading it. The story development is a bit slow which is fine with me since it does not damage the plot. Another negative I noticed was that there were some misused punctuation but nothing to deter from the read. Another positive thing about the novel is the author's writing style. It is definitely better than some authors here in Webnovel. Paragraphs are also in the perfect length and so far, nothing seemed wordy or whatsoever. Good luck to the author!
Story is good, i think chapter 11 is just like overlord right? And the characters are not really explained how they look exactly. It's kinda hard to imagine how they look like, i think you should explain them a little more detailed like for ex. Red long hair in a ponytail with white pale skin and a niceor sexy curve body with fierce personality. Something like like that, well i kinda like the story it's getting more interesting, also i wish the update gets stable. Hahaha just stating that comes to my mind so i could write something.
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I like the plot, but why is the spelling so bad? If you don't know how to right some thing go google it or ask some one how knows. I'm personally not bothered by the spelling but I'm sure many people are.
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(Slightly spoilery review, but not really a spoiler)Good novel very enjoyable. The Mc is a transmigrator and more or less the typical cautious cowardly protagonist, but in my opinion its done in such a way where its not overly irritating and fits the novel. After all he is a background character so it makes sense and meshes well with his system's abilities.Besides the Mc the other characters have been given enough time to grow to a point where I at least have an inkling of each of them, although it would probably take a number of more chapters to make each of them more distinct. (talking about the side characters here) The development of the story can be considered slow, but I find it to be a good pace for a background character, naturally for protagonist speeds it does feel lacking but in the context of the novel its well paced.World Background is quite good so far, obviously its not all that fleshed out since the protagonist has stayed in the Sect for the entirety of the novel up to this point, but the Sect feels real at least which is more than I can say for most Xianxia. (although it still has a lot of the blatant Xianxia Sect stereotypes but rather than a flaw I'd say that's more played as a comedic aspect/the world purposefully being like a Xianxia novel.)To conclude this novel is a solid 4-5 stars, the only reason the score is as low as it is, is because of how infrequently its updated.I do recommend reading it though if you'd like a change from a traditional Xianxia, and are all right with the fact that the novel rarely update.
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Nice work author-san. Really appreciate the book.
Well... Although the idea is ok, the quality is not very good. First, typos, grammar errors and such. Not too many, but still more than should be. Author, please, at least use Grammarly (I think that's how add-on is called) to check before posting.Secondly, and this is most important. The story is just sketch. Little to no descriptions, little immersion, little to nothing on characters, they just feel blank, lacking details, thoughts or feelings. This is why they so forgettable.Conclusion: I don't recommend it. It's not that bad that you can not read, but it just doesn't worth it at the moment. Hopefully, things would change, but maybe not.
story is very good so far I like it very much
Alright so I made a review earlier and I went way too easy, this has to be a horrible novel, I gave it 3.6 but it's not worth that, the author is dumb, added a whole new thing to the world background, Mc has op plot armor, does no work and gets legendary shield class and op abilities in only the 8th chapter. I feel really bad for the people that read this. Trust me, it's not worth it and even the author dropped it. Don't read this go find something actually good