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Did you dropped this or is it on break ? Please don’t tell me you dropped it ?
enticing and mystical , romance filled and action loaded.
Latest chapters are pretty satisfying and uniquely dark can’t wait for like to see how this story develops
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I have seen how author worked hard for this story. the plot and world background is very good and author is consistent with updates. and he has planned novel to last long, so you can rest assured that he won't drop it anytime sooner
While it doesn’t bring much new to the equation of saving the villainess otome isekai otome game more than makes up for it in some of the best excecution I’ve seen in some time. Characters: The protagonist and love interest are likeable and have great chemistry, the antagonist is deliciously hatable but not too the degree where it effects the readers suspension of disbelief, (as a side people like that exist I have met them), side characters aren’t neglected at all and have enough spotlight placed on them that they are memorable but not so much that they steal the spotlight from the main cast.Pacing: it retains a good forward momentum so that you feel like something worth reading has happened but doesn’t feel rushed. Plot points don’t feel needlessly dragged out and every word feels as if it serves a purpose rather than being there to increase word count.Settings: the setting is a typical magic school otome setting nothing really of note here but the story is character driven so that doesn’t retract from the quality overall.Release rate: a good stable one chapter per week with consistent quality, minimal typos, and moderate length.Writing Quality: Great, it’s clearly been properly proofread, the author clearly cares about this story and i haven’t run into any instances where I had to read a section more than once to figure out what’s going on. PS: to the author, originality is overrated, execution is far more important so don’t take my comment on “not bringing anything new to the equation” as a negative point.
So far I’ve enjoyed the book. The beginning was engaging and the power system seems well thought out. The characters are intriguing and I’m looking forward to reading more.
I'm having a good development from the beginning, the protagonist is not too idiotic and the plot simply does not make everyone look like idiots.At the moment we are on chapter 22 if I remember correctly and I hope that the personality of the protagonist advances with his ambitions and becomes someone Dominant like a tyrant. Let him only defend interests, since he comes from below and only his fat partner helps him as a roommate. Help him contribute in the future to repay that favor.
What really caught my eye first was the title, then the synopsis and the first few chapters.From disappointment to slowly getting herself together I have to admit I like where this is going already. Keep it up!I will be waiting for more.
hey from India here it's decent and a good meme name. ?I too have started a novel recently but it hasn't received much views I know a little selfish and shameless but please help. but truly it was a decent read.
Bonjour Madjic je suis un fan de la dernière heure, j'ai aimé 2 de vos œuvres j'aimerais connaître les dates et les heures de publication précise des chapitres de ces œuvres si vous pouviez m'aider parce que actuellement je suis dans une période scolaire très importante et je ne pourrai pas surveiller à chaque fois à quel moment vous avez pu publier le chapitres du jour donc j'aimerais connaître les dates et heures précises de publication les œuvres en question sont the futanari system Et un chasseur de prime galactique merci beaucoup de votre attention.
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