Lmfao bruh I'm dead
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HAHSHAHAHHAHA I LOVE MC'S SISTER SM
Revenge is my go to genre, especially when... The main character scores some serious backup and magic way beyond what they bagged in their past life. I mean, who hasn't daydreamed about that in the same boat? At least we can let it all out through fictional characters, right?
Long live King Arryn!
10 chapters in as of now, and I can honestly say that this novel has potential. It has good writing quality, with little to no serious errors in grammar, decent story development, and its unique compared to what I usually read on the app. Excited to see how it progresses, and I hope the author keeps writing
One of the best novels so far!!
Slow update.
Author need to release more chapters.
3.8 for inconsistent chapter release.
Couldn't give myself less stars. Anyways, here are some things you need to know about the novel:
1. The novel has a good plot. I have a very interesting background in mind for the world building.
2. There would be many lovemaking scenes.
3. No dreams are smalls.
4. It is a partly wish fulfillment.
5. MC is overpowered
6. MC has a dual identity which is hinted in first two chapters.
7. There would be both virgins and non-virgin woman in the novel.
8. The main girls would have fleshed out personality instead of robotic personality
Another one novel autor using us to review his work then dumping us with this premium thing. What can i say, it's not nice. Better get it down the ladder so others know not to start reading it. Sorry
Honestly, i didnt think much. What grabbed me for a moments time was the title. Figure I’d read a few chapters an most likely not like it an move on. But before I knew it. I had read all the chapters. Hellish good read, read them all in 1 sitting.
More support for the translator ..its soooo great novel ..properly balanced and not just everyday cultivation where everyone is fighter and same kill kill kill..it has more sotry into it and balanced/ little powerfull which is understandable since he is MC but u wont get fed up but its just theres not love for tranaslator and supporter otherwise great and just low chapter week but i...i can endure this hardship
The writing quality is great not many problems with grammar and the likes, but the storyline is a bit erratic and don’t have a good build up at the beginning. Imo the first 50 chapters are the foundation of a story, and should be where the reader decides to stay or drop the novel. I myself probably won’t finish the novel as I dislike any holes in the story, especially at the beginning and skipping time without at least a summary of what happened in the next couple chapters.
Not trying to say the author is bad or anything, for a novice it’s pretty good, but I’ve read many of these different world/kingdom building novels so this one failed to keep my interest.
Give it a read though, and support the author as they could be a hidden gem that just needs a polish, as we all need more good stories. Keep up the good work!
Well Author you should have given the title PUBG touch down