this is free on MTL with a bunch of chapters ..................................................
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this is a very good fic a shame it is put in novel and not fanfic so it was by random curiosity I even found it.
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I would like to ask if this has been dropped before I start reading
this is junk food xian Xia trash to the limit I'd rather read an encyclopedia since I'd be learning something while getting bored to death not to mention the characters are one dimensional and the mc is unlikable and boring there is next to no plot, the number of badly done cliches are astounding. don't waste your time qidian is filled with these trashy novels the only reason i read this was because i was stupid enough to believe these fake ratings that are everywhere nowadays.
not a bad story. but as usual with many stories on Webnovel the editing starts out good and then goes to the dump.
first 110 chapters are good quality. Then it starts to degrade fast. missing punctuation, missing captilization for names, incorrect grammar, changing established names, etc.
if the quality of the chapters editing had stayed the same I would rate it as 3/5. good to read to pass the time. I give it q star due to the usual drop of good quality to garbage editing.
The synopsis has told me the entire story without even reading it. 1001001011111000101011100101001010111111000011110101001100101010101010100101010101010111111010100101111110010101101010100110101010101010101111010101111001110010010100000010100001001110111100
Have yet to read this but will update once I do. However, the premises of the story is based on a betrayal in game. I don’t know why it would matter so much since it’s only a game—it’s not like their life is on the line like in SAO. Why doesn’t he just start over? Better yet, he should choose better friends.
Doesn’t sound that interesting but I’ll read it anyways since I’ve caught up on all my favorite stories.
First of: Qidian deletes all low-star reviews, which just goes to show what a dishonest bunch they are.
The story in my view, really isn't very good. There are a lot of typos, a lot of careless mistakes.
the story is cool in the beginning, but it gets very repetitive and boring fast.
It's 1to1 WorldOfWarcraft in book-form.
You time is precious don't waste it on painfully mediocre things like this.
I really like it so far ch 5 I hope you update it more often it's good and has good potential hope to see more of it soon! ..................
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The definition of mediocre and cliched, the story is boring and simple with nothing unique or special about it. The main character is supposedly smart but never shows it. The enemies are all brainless young masters. the world building is nonexistent.
Worst system ever plus story doesnt make any sense at all. MC magically save his dad plus died and save his dad again????? I mean.. WTH.. and the system talk too much. It should aid the MC not blabber this and that.. sigh