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Uhmm. I’m in chapter 10 so far the story is good but the translation is getting worst. It is much better in novelupdates so you can read it there.
Ironically despite me not liking romance themed novel I find its the only decent one out of the entire batch guess cause it doesn't focus on romance
update stability-5/5everything else-0/5just couldn't manage to continue,mtl , it's horrendous,it just doesn't tick my box,tough to read...
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Pure plagiarism and god awful writing. Not sure what other readers were reading to give this an avg score of 4.8 but all I read was filler and info dumps of WOW plagiarism. This has to be the 50th WOW copy I’ve read on this site.Why are CN authors so obsessed with WOW? There are plenty of better MMOs to copy from.
there are a lot of mistakes i suggest you use grammarly i use it when i wright essay i think it would help you. it works on mobile to .....
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It has a decent start that’s going somewhere.Only problemS are within the grammar. Some sentences had minor problems.The big problem however is that the Author mixes up his past and present tense. This honestly puts me off as someone who grew up with English and it might affect my writing if i get into so imma stop reading.My advice is to get software like grammarly or just get an editor but this is the author’s story so he can do whatever he wants.Maybe in the future, I’ll come back to this.
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