Minx_999
"Hello, Elixir Supplier, I am going into battle and I want your strongest Elixirs."
"My Elixirs are too strong for you, traveler."
"Elixir Supplier, I tell you I am going into battle, and I want only your strongest Elixirs."
"You can't handle my Elixirs. They're too strong for you."
"Elixir Supplier, listen to me; I want only your strongest Elixirs."
"My Elixirs would kill you, traveler. You cannot handle my Elixirs."
"Elixir Supplier, enough of these games. I'm going into battle and I need your strongest Elixirs."
"My strongest Elixirs would kill you, traveler. You can't handle my strongest Elixirs. You'd better go to a Supplier that sells weaker Elixirs."
"Elixir Supplier, I'm telling you right now; I'm going into battle and I need only your strongest Elixirs."
"You don't know what you ask, traveler. My strongest Elixirs will kill a dragon let alone a man. You need a Supplier that sells weaker Elixirs, because my Elixirs are too strong."
"Elixir Supplier, I'm telling you I need your strongest Elixirs. I'm going into battle! I'm going to battle and I need your strongest Elixirs!"
"You can't handle my strongest Elixirs! No one can! My strongest Elixirs are fit for a beast let alone a man."
"Elixir Supplier, what do I have to tell you to get your Elixirs? Why won't you trust me with your strongest Elixirs, Elixir Supplier? I need them if I'm to be successful in the battle!"
"I can't give you my strongest Elixirs because my strongest Elixirs are only for the strongest beings and you are of the weakest."
"Well then that's it, Elixir Supplier. I'll go elsewhere. I'll go elsewhere for my Elixirs."
"That's what you'd better do."
"I'll go elsewhere for my Elixirs and I'll never come back!"
"Good. You're not welcome here! My Elixirs are only for the strongest and you're clearly are not of the strongest you're clearly the weakest."
"You've had your say, Elixir Supplier but I'll have mine. You're a rascal, you're a rascal with no respect for knights. No respect for anything...except your Elixirs!"
"Why respect knights...when my Elixirs can do anything that you can..."
The protagonist is a useless dog for his wife.
The only unique thing is the new concept of the system, other things like world background and plot are nothing new and even quite lame to a certain extent, I'm not fond of harem and early romance, so when the mc entangles with women right in the first several chapters, I got turned off instantly. Not my cup of tea.
Sound decent. A reborn revenge story, I hope the MC isn’t too OP so there can be more striggle and action instead of one sided massacre. Looking forward!
Start out good. Fall off fast.
I got hooked by how much story contained in a chapter. It feels the progress is quite fast, less bullsh*t and get straight to the point. It shows how the mc is slowly growing.
Too bad after around 200+ chapters it starts to worsen. More fillers, boring battles, nonsense cultivation system, inconsistent mc personality, repetitive plot. I actually read word per word before but find myself skim almost every chapters after 250+. And I still know what the hell is happening. Straight skipping battles, there's no need to bother reading those useless description, jump onto the battle result and you still wont miss anything. No need to remember new technique or weapon obtained, since dozens chapters later it would be replaced. No need to remember names too, they'll soon be forgotten and never appear again anyway. Definitely just skip cultivation/technique description, same reason, it will soon be forgotten and didnt even have any effect on battles or whatsoever.
The read can be a little slow in the beginning, but things picks up later. He clearly accepts and adapts to the world to become a real barbarian. He's straight forward like the other barbarians but still be vigilant against others he deemed suspicious; thinking more for himself but gets misunderstood as love for his people.
I've read a little ahead, he definitely embraces the barbarian's style of strength, power, and dominance... against his enemies and women; he went Khal Drogo with one of his concubine (who isn't a princess).
Overall....approve.
The characters drove the plot to a satisfying conclusion, and resolved every issue.The plot was cleverly woven, with each scene leading toward a larger goal. The conclusion answered all the questions the story asked, and resolved the plot. It started and ended strong. The only problem is the update stability.
Author nim has the novel been dropped? Been waiting for new chapters for over 3 months
Okay so. I like the idea of the apocalypse (in story form) but you seriously need to make a better language edit before you post it.
The character is good and I see potential so good luck!! And hope to see more chapters from you.
disgusting
simply disgusting
this actually gave me brain damage
it disgusts me the fact that someone thought this history was good enough to get paid
disgusting
I really love this piece and its quite inspiring for an upcoming author new to Chinese fantasy stories. Xiao Ming is an interesting character I look forward to in his achievements.
