Frankly one of the best novels I’ve read in a long while.❤️❤️
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First of all thanks for all the hard work. lets star by basics:
Writing Quality "4"- Its good to see all author comments inside chapters its funny it suits the story well. Grammar is nice and it keep you to read all that u actually wrote and not just scroll trow it like in some other novels your`s actually keep me to read it normally so that big plus.
Stability of Upadate "4"- Would be nice to keep it stable of 7chap/week but its proly hard for you with school and other irl stuff so i wont say much just that i would be nice to see more chapters :D <3
Story Development "4"- Its a cool concept of cultivation in modern time with a sprinkle of comedy and you`r combing it quite nice. Keep up the good work with that.
Character Design "4"- Would be nice to see more complex or more depth characters. But still your doing nice job for now and i like it.
World Background "3"- Cant give more for real. I will for sure give more later on when more things are introduce but still imo you should put more job in this place. Ill give some examples: You named the universe and realms and i know we will find out that later on but still is he now on planet or some pagoda flying in space? All i recall reading he woke up after leaveing earth but i dont get where is he now. I know its his master place but is it a planet or spaceship ;D Maybe i missed it somehow not sure. Also try writing on paper make a map of a world in ur mind. The with that u can see background of things more stadly and work on a story from that point of view. It will be maybe easy`r for you to move from there if u got blocked. Tho imo your doing really nice job for now and i really like the book. For everyone else who is reading i give big suggestion to start reading this novel if u havent and support author somehow . Its damn good read and its really nice change of pace of common MC type of OP/EZ KILL ALL etc... this one is damn special and amusing and i like him alot. Keep up the good work man ;) Best regards Salcho
Why? Why Bai Qiuran's novel is translated again?...............................................................................................................
the writing quality is good but story line and characters make you want to scream the author is a typical MC writing where the MC has nothing going for him and forces a bond the the romance partner wouldn't recommend reading
Shameless Author here.
I would like this story to be a fun read, have light moments like humor, world building and explore the personalites of the MCs and the female heroines lead.
Please drop comments in the chapters and laugh at the sillyness sometimes ☺️
I can recommend this novel to everyone who likes VRMMORPG's. I really like the concept of your novel. The links between the cultivation world and the game are very interesting. Keep up the good work!
completed at 273? is the author san dead?
The story is interesting, I really like this story. It is worth waiting for the continuation of each chapter.
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As the author ill have to give myself a fair critique point of view because i know my flaws and some might see the Glitches in the story line, Alex’s background ignored and further more like those but pls Just have patience as all your observations are more than welcomed .
Really good story, the background of the story is amazing and the ability is very interesting. its ability made it the most flexible to adapt to another kind of Goldfinger. but the writing quality is so bad. the grammar basically sucks and not interested
Overall nice story. Till chapter 10, the writing quality is nice and gets a bit better as the story moves on. Although the plot is unique. Although the development is not unique and the back story is a bit common, the plot progression is different from most of the novels.
The world background and character development are nice.
Kinda like the way that the MC ignores people completely when he is irritated by them. You don't get to see such distinct traits in characters too often.
Nice work, keep it up Author San.