great job on the novel. keep up the good work.................................................................................................
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not to my tastes at all, pretty disappointed QI would add a novel like this. Sexual assault isn't something to joke and make light of like this novel does.
I really like the direction so far, I find their interaction to be really funny. I cant believe he's getting away with treating edward like that though. I thought he would have been punished but maybe that's because edward has been keeping his attitude towards him a secret lol
This is a romantic misunderstanding love story. It has great promises. I can already see that there will be alot of followers for this story. It is a wonderful story. The MC clearly loves his wife while the wife has a mysterious past.Thanks for sharing this wonderful and awesome story!:)
Yuhuuu... Start reading this book from the first five chapters and I like how the story is well written. Especially the part showing Leo's emotions when he started moving to Sky Hills. Not gonna lie if I were his friend, going to be choked with his power too. He is too strong!! A nice plot so far..
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I will get to each reason why and will update frequently maybe every fifty chapters 1:Writing quality- most is great writing quality the only issue is the lack of description and depth to the world and story which correlates to two other, there is also the fact that it doesn’t explain a lot about time, so it gets confusing, that’s why it got a three2:Updating Stability- pretty standard not to the point where I can read a new chapter everyday but I can understand so I still gave it a 4 star3:Story Developement- the story goes fast paced which doesn’t allow me personally to get a sense of depth with the characters and it kind of goes too fast with the affinities and gaining of abilities, that’s why I gave it a 3 star4:Character design- we don’t really don’t get any defining features of the character like body build background or history so it makes it hard to envision it which is why it got a 2 star5:World Background- we don’t get a lot of explanation about the world and what it looks like and we have no history of anything like families of the characters or anything like that so in my opinion that’ s why I gave it a 2 starI thank you for reading my review and don’t let it keep you from reading the story because the concept is great this is only here for the author to better his book, have a great day this will be updated when we reach 50 chapters so look forward to it
This really is an excellent novel. I always look forward to the release of new chapters. Updates are a little slow in coming because this is just one of many works by this author. Author would recommend reading some of their other works as well but I'm just too invested in this novel and don't want to get my plots, or characters, mixed up. One star off in quality because sentence structure can be a bit confusing at times. I will, however, defend the quality of this book and author with my last breath the same as I would my other 2 authors, and the works of theirs, that I read.
Really great short light read. Fast paced. The characters are very likeable. I just need more of them. Them FLS team needs some side stories!!!
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