Nice story so far, like the concepts. Lets see how it goes.
I love this book it's so cool I'm so addicted to this
Guy, this book is sharp. Keep up the good work. pls update quickly and thanks for this nice chapters
i can't wait ? to see the end of this love between Daniel and Ava
After 13 chapters, the characters begin behaving and speaking in extremely unexpected ways, talking about events that never happened while also forgetting events that did happen. I'm almost certain that the author has two different versions of the same novel, with critical differences in the events of the plot between the two, and has mistakenly mixed up chapters of the two together. The story was going well at first, although the chemistry between the two main characters was lacking. But I initially dismissed it as just awkward writing. But after reading the 14th and 15th chapter, nothing made sense anymore and the attraction between the two felt more forced than ever. On the bright side, the way the author narrates the environment, the mood, and the thoughts and feelings of the characters is extremely good. I just hope that whatever made the characters begin behaving oddly and speaking in very self-contradictory ways gets resolved. The fact that nearly everything that happened during the first chapters is contradicted in a single dialogue in the 14th chapter leads me to believe that a huge mixup must have happened. The inconsistency is hard to overlook. I truly was enjoying the story but it just took such a sudden nosedive that I can't justify continuing to read it. Good luck, author.
Very readable translation, consistent good uploads, great story what more could you want. The only problem is that I binged this story way too quickly.
When i first saw the title, I thought it was just going to be a very sad, tragic story...but damn, there's tension, romance and chemistry between the leads...I truly hope they get their happy ending, Thanks Elf_queen, I'm loving this novel so far.
nice one i like the Pace too continue like that ???
This book is like Twilight without Bella with a hint of fear. Perfect for when you want down or experience something horrifying! Great use of words in describing what these characters are doing & what they're experiencing.
I like your writing style, and the pace of the story. The readers can enjoy it because you can showing the characters expression very well.
good start, mix of splice of life and action
Found this story on ScribbleHub & saw that it was not on WebNovels so I'm uploading it here. Pretty good story, with the exception of a few confusing words that I hope to correct.NGL the chances of you liking it are pretty great, give it a try. Credit to the original author 'ShoujoDirector'Pls Try