hello, Can you review this book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please
It's the second webnovel I read from I_Cook and its work of art once again. It's really easy to immerse yourself while reading; language and vocabulary used are superb, grammar is on point without mistakes and story just flow.Pacing is stable throughout the chapters so far (up to 141), no plot holes or too obvious plot armor and yeah ofc mc got good stuff, skills etc- look at the tags, he is supposed to be strong and op.I like that romance just happend without NTR or some young master lusting over fml for over 40 chapters like in other novels- it's adorable and hits that sweet spot you are craving from romance tag. (possible spoiler- FML is NOT useless ! and is NOT ice user xD) Chemistry between characters is great, dialogues allow to easily differentiate different people talking, with each of them having their own quriks etc; moreover it's not just dialogues, each character feels like real 3d living being and not 2d background character. If I were to point something out then it would be long descriptions to skills, items and whatnot taking a lot of word count, but it's matter of personal preference- some may skip it, some may like it. Personally I like reading these effects, my only worry would be power scaling xD But i strongly believe author will provide and story will continue to slap.
It's good . Overall interesting thing to read for now, not all that much else I can really say?
This is the kind of book you get into when you get the urge to read something ‘Different’ for a change. Not so bad writing, surely promising plot line, and the frequently, popular system that we all love. (Great cheat codes.) Support the author so he doesn’t drop this book immaturely…
I'll just have to dump 10 chapters with 1000 worth of words within a day. Expect to see some mass updates. (Saturday deadline)
My name is Ifritz, the son of Jinni Scretz my Mother, and Satan Madisgood my Father.
"Or ... The assistant will have fun with you Doc--"
"Oh thats sound interesting," said me casually.
"Hmm, I like them well enough," Ren Zexian agreed. With his words, the smile upon Nathan's face seemed to become more brilliant, causing the familiar stirring in the older man's chest. He inwardly sighed. This lovely boy held an attraction for him that he could not explain and felt as if he was a whelp fresh with youthful nerves when standing before him.
-Asylum-
-Chapter 1 to 4 were actually published last March 20, 2019 the day Perth Tanapon was born a thai actor. I realy admire Perth. Chapter 5 and 6 were publihed last March 21, 2019 and chapters 7 - 10 were published at March 22, 2019 the day Ohm Pawat was born, a thai actor too
Nice to meet you, please take care of our Wormy!