That_Cultivator
At this point she only needs to believe in her luck. Well, if only the arrow would be friendly to her and shot her target would be a little nice.
"Can you jog across the field?" Ye Bai said as he pointed towards an area that is quite far from the zombie. It was convenient since it was the direction of Huaxi Middle School.
{Ban: 300,000 SP}
"Yup see ya tomorrow."
Usopp and Chopper were cowering behind Sanji as a savage looking man with metallic claws for hands was staring them down.
Thinking the danger that Ye diànxià will cause to her beloved, makes her hate and despise him to the core. If not because she wanted to trap him, she'll never give him a chance to be near her.
"Mommy?" I say. My voice goes a bit higher at the end, sounding a bit more urgent than it did before.
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I have to talk about the dialogue in this batch because it's genuinely excellent. The characters don't all sound the same—which is rare in this genre. Yu Lin's voice is sharp and calculated, always with an edge. When she tells her stepmother "I suggest you adjust your attitude," that's not just words, that's a complete character shift from the humble concubine-born daughter she used to be. The line "You're still a fallen marchioness who relies on me to maintain appearances in front of others"—chilling. Perfectly delivered. But what really stands out is how the author uses dialogue to show power dynamics. Look at this exchange: "Mother, I think it would also be reasonable for Younger Sister to host." Yu Mu'an saying this while sitting quietly, cup in hand, is devastating. She sounds so gentle and reasonable, but she's basically saying "my sister-in-law should take this burden because her husband is entering official service and she needs experience." It's weaponized politeness. And Hu Rui's response—"Because she is the legitimate eldest daughter of the Marquis household and the eldest young madam of our General's residence!"—that's the kind of line that reveals everything about the mother-in-law's priorities. The servants' gossip at the end is also great because it sounds exactly like what servants would say. "Even if he's foolish, he's still the eldest young master. Don't tell me you've never thought about it?" That's natural, almost comedic, and it gives us insider information without feeling forced. And Yu Lin's internal reaction—"Who are you calling improper?!"—is funny because it breaks the formal dialogue pattern and reminds us she's a real person underneath all the scheming. The author's voice throughout is confident and never slips into exposition dumps. Dialogue does all the heavy lifting here.
Lanjut!!
"This should be easy with my stats" I mumble with a chuckle when I am all alone with no one to hear me. "System open my stats!"
THIS NOVEL IS DROPPED
