I like this novel a lot, intrigued storyline, interesting world. A bit slow character development but still good. Can't wait next chapter ...
Not bad for a story with only 5 chapters. managed to get me perfectly hooked. I don't think i've read a better first 5 chapters in any other books.
Keep going Author. Good Luck
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This is translation review, not novel review.
If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator.
With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity.
And with the worst case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel).
overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.
I already wrote a review but I just took a huge blow from the awesomeness of your story with chapter 99 so here I go! I absolutely adore your work, your words, your universe, your characters, your plot. I mean isn't it too much of a great story? Just how far do intend to go with this creativity of yours?
Every description just left my brain mushy with gory pictures and I'm startled to see how much I enjoy it! Please oh please, keep writing
Full action pact book, interesting and very written. The book is flawless and the author has done a very good job. Read just two chapters and I could stop myself from giving a review. This book definitely deserves 5 star. Great talent.
If you love MC with Treasures and with loyal subordinates and kingdom building the this novel is for you.I like the mood of the story and it's progress is not fast nor slow just smooth and fine.The way the situation portrayed is great even the dynamic actions are detailed that you will imagine the scene to your head.Overall this is one of my favorite type of novel,great work author. Looking forward for the upcoming chapters.^_^
author, why is this marked as complete?Add more, please
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I haven't readed it yet, but hope it's good
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So this story has basically everything one can get in cliche.A cliche ntr'd McA weak to Op McEasy to get Harem MembersA lot of common troupes.And my final review?It's good, I mean freaking good if you just ignore the writing quality which is a bit bad, but well I have read thousands of novels, cliche, or whatnot and I have enough common sense to tell if a story with cliches is good or bad.Mc isn't a beta JP or CP and becomes fairly smart and cunning after receiving one blow after another quite early, he gets women using his cunningness despite it having some cliche elements the end result is quite satisfactory.What are the good points of this novel?1) Good No, of Chapters.2) Stable updates(I am not sure about this, I mean Author is giving regular chapters but it can change anytime considering he is going in university)3) Good World Building( World Building is satisfactory at least till I have read, only things necessary to the current story are explained which are simple and easy to remember, it also gives Author huge flexibility when he will expand the world-building later on)4) Good Characters( Mc of the novel is a guy with flaws, but they aren't the flaws one would normally dislike at least during the later chapters, I mean he is using his cunningness and dominating all the women he wants to, no simply act or something, seriously I would have given a 1-star review if Mc was like that, those type of Mc's are super annoying following females like dogs, but yes his flaws are not something that will make you dislike him, he has a quite likable personality as well leaning more towards a smart villain than an honest good guy, but yup he isn't a straight up villain either.And yeah other female characters have been fleshed out well as well, I mean it's not something excellent but at least you can't just dislike them for lack of any character.)Now, what is bad about this Novel?1) A lot of cliches are used though they aren't bad at all, I mean Author is new and he thankfully managed to put off these cliches quite well.2)Writing Quality is not excellent but quite good.3)Mc has flaws, some major ones which get 100% better as the story goes on but doesn't changes the fact some of his flaws might be disliked by some of the readers(Don't worry no simpy or beta Mc)My Final Review?4.6 stars which will definitely be shown as mere 4 stars