Some words during descriptions being repeated a little too often, e.g.; Was in the capital of the New World Order. The capital of the New World Order was called New Hope in honor of the New World Order...
One paragraph had the descriptor mentioned 6 times.
Mix up the sentences a little, maybe shrink it and it would be great. :]
The story is interesting but a lot of information to digest in the early chapters. Looking forward to more!
The plot is amazing, it fans out smoothly over the chapters. I was instantly hooked after reading first few chapters. The character development and writing proficiency is good, except for a few grammatical errors here and there. Will readily recommend it to readers if they are interested in sci fi and adventurous plots like this one.
Keep up the good work
This book bites my imagination and the continuous description of events and scientific experiments got me glued. The writer's imaginations are thick and solid not everyone has the mind to write a scientific novel but you did. Godspeed.?
I got tricked by the cover. I thought it's a cultivation story or something similar. Anyway, I read till chapter 117. In short: very boring. The start is skipped with no proper introduction on how the MC was and how he got a system or why, the story is all about mc goes somewhere, scan, find/dig treasure, and then sells it. This repeats infinitely. The whole theme here is the MC flexing on the viewers (face slapping). Extremely boring read.
it could have been good, but its just the usual moronic enemies/everyone else. why do they always refuse to see that the MC changed and go "hurr durr trash go die!" lol (repeat ad infinitum)
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The four main factors of this book
Misunderstandings
Mc is the most handsome
Providence(or luck fate, destiny etc) and
Concubine Lan would be happy
A very nice gamer book. Almost found myself in it while sleeping I thought I was one of them contractors.. Though some typo errors could be encounter, its the story itself that brought spices.. Its nothing more than an rpg,felt like the author is a maniac or just addicted to guns.. Just the overkilling and bruttality that makes me cringe sometimes.. Overall, good job!!
Classic trashy xianxia modern day only with terrible english to the point that you can't read it.
Worst part is the Webnovel admins allowed it to go premium/paid and have privilege. F*ck me
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The story is good and the author knows how to sprinkle some humor in it, the author's description of events is excellent and the plot itself is interesting.
Anyone know where to find the mtl or raw for the novel.
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