As a person who also love games especially RPG's. This is truly a relatable fantasy to be imagined with, people like me who did not have the opportunity to become a pro-gamer or wish to become one, can treasure this masterpiece and enjoy it's journey to become champions and feels like we are too. I really recommend these. Thanks for the author and the translators as well.
Why is this out of the trial list. I think this book deserved a shot plus I pay some good coins for the chapters and I would pay more to see it goes 24 chapter a week
Hey author the discord link says "Invite Invalid" pls fix it and BTW do not drop this masterpiece
I just gave it average (3) on anything I don't know the answer to, since I only seriously read one chapter.The English was too much for me, so I can't read it.If I had to give advice, learn what a period is and how to stop run on sentences. That's the most glaring flaw I saw, present all the way to the latest chapter at the time of writing - 104 or something, new world, new customs?I'd also probably try and correct at least the first chapter's grammar at some point, since it plays a large role in deciding if new readers want to stick with a book.Still. The idea has potential, so don't take the review harshly. Keep writing and doing you. I just don't like it when all the reviews say something I think is a blatant lie, like the English being flawless.You know more languages than I, no shame there.
that synopsis was like a warning resounding in my ears "this novel is cliche this novel is trash stay away for your own mental wellbeing". well, thank you, translator, for the wonderful synopsis. And I'm rating this five stars cuz I haven't read this novel and so I gave it a default rating to offset the 1 stars
I am pretty sure this is one of best novels i have read..........the story development is also good ....But now the chapters release keeps on decreasing and now it doesn't even have a stable updates.........What's going on..
Raw mtl : 我这么天才为何还要收徒弟Auithor : 木易生火 Lv 5Yo I am currently writing a Fan-fic about a Uchiha Itachi in the Naruto, if that interests you, please check it out. I strongly believe that if you read the first chapter, you will want to read the next chapter(s) too. I know, I’m shamelessly promoting myself using other novels, but a guys gotta get some exposure one way or another, am I right? Also, if you read this far and haven’t already checked out the novel you are now obligated to do so. Thanks to anyone who decides to check it out.
please continue writing this novel ,it was well made and the plot and pacing is good
This novel is completely different from my usual novel of choice but somehow i cant stop reading. The pacing is slow and not much goes on but the slice of life and comedy somehow goes down well for me ?
well i believe that mc is too much op. also in the beginning you can see some reason in the history, but later on all the chapters run between sex, sado and masochism, also the mc has a 2 ia´s helping him, one inside him, other outside, but in a magical ring. when you look at it you are jumping between universes where there is magic, tech, potion, aliens, elven, gods, alchemy long live people and time changing paradox. but all it is inside a whirlpool around the mc. where he just do as he like, also he has a complex with his parent, whenever he is. in a time place his 10 y.o mother is his babysitter, but in the next reality he is saving/ taking control of earth and he is about to have sex with her own mother that in that reality has 20 y.o although all those chapters are a little fun, but breaking and jumping that way made the novel too much heavy, where some times one has to ask when or where some sideline will continue or how. also the author take too much from others people ideas or novel, just to spice his own work. it was funny but when you used something too much its work backwards. i do think that the author should calm down a little bit, take care about some of the ideas or realities or follow them to a certain degree. not just jumping like crazy every 3-6 chapters and using just the time mastering as glue to unify everything here. the potential for a great novel its here, but it needs to work and polish a little more to be there
Not consistent storyline, character has no goal. Constantly told to change careers by his "system." Change of career, abandons his fans from last career. Not really a face slapping story, more of a "conning you into thinking I am serious about the new career move" story.
Here is my review. Good writing skill and I can know it since the first chapter. the story is well-built. I suggest you to lock chapter between chapter 35-40