The story is light and easy to understand. The world-building is also very interesting, I like how the main character is introduced and the interaction with other characters. So much fun to read! Good job author![img=recommend][img=recommend]
Book started off good and could be really good yet right in the middle the author decided to nerf the permanent abilities of the mc so he didn’t get to strong to fast along with randomly changing other things and saying his skills improved without changing them means a 1 star from me
I've already read the first 5 chapters and now I will continue stacking chapters until the time comes for hunter to take revenge
Typical hiding MC's background nonsense. MC let's himself be walked all over. overall super cliche trying to force out revenge and surprise of oh look my husband is rich.
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From what I could read the story was subpar. The characters are annoying. The translator looks like he ran this through a bad mtl then edited it wrong. Overall the novel is 1 star and that is because I can’t give it a lower score
I definitely enjoy this story, however, I have stopped reading it. The cost of the chapters is very high for their length and the author adds unnecessary advertising at the end of each chapter that pads the word count. 9 tokens a chapter for such short chapters feels like a ripoff. The cute baby talk spelling gets tiring at some point as well.
1st mission: “Penalty for failure: Death”The story is great but the author really has no idea how to create tension. Every single character will be railroaded into a forced path and there will be no decission making, you will always know what will happen next. However it is at least an decently interesting path.Great story and concept. But the author just never leaves any possibility for alternate paths or ”what if” questions. Anything important was always going to happen the exact way it happened because the author only left one path for the story to continue.
I'm not impressed. TL quality is at "edited MTL" Level with constant 'Gems' like "blood level" Instead of HP. Story (or the 3/4 that I managed to understand) seems pretty nice so far, but IMO still middle of the pack in "video game" Genre. Get a decent editor to fix the "blood level" Mess and it would be decent 3.8 IMO.
For all purposes this is a great and well thought out novel, but it makes me uncomfortable seeing a unfeeling mc. It's kinda disappointing seeing such a dark mc, he has good sides sure but he is very evil and manipulative. The overlord novel with seraph is much better and a much more fair mc.