Just average, went through mtl until the end, still thought stopping a few times. A few annoying moments such as repeating the same situation from point of view of MC and then other characters, just this alone could shorten the novel by 30% for sure and maybe even more. Another repetite moment is when optic brain solves everything, as opponent does something MC analysis through optic brain and just solves it, and its done. Moreover, another annoying thing is author forgetting parts of the story, not often but around 3-5 times, still impacts the experience. The ending was quite abrupt and anticlimactic, I am sure without all that repetite stuff the novel would have lasted much longer with better ending.
I quite like the whole concept of assistance from a super brain in form of optic brain or some form of artificial intelligence, the best to date is Warlock of the Magus World where MC is already intelligent and the A.I. chip is just giving wings to the tiger, but in this case the writting is lacking. Still good effort
This novel is amazing, I usually read content with lots of fights, but in 40 chapters I fell in love with this, it's a slice of life that has cultivation around it, but the greater focus is in the relationship the protagonist has with other characters, their personalities are all well built, the story makes sense and is captivating. There are tids and bits of comedy but also lots of sweet moments throughout it, I guess there will be fights once the protagonist reaches a certain level of power, but for now, only trivial things bothered him, to a level where anyone could experience the same thing. Give this story a go, fights and near death situations are not the only quality content out there.
This is so dumb. No different from any other Chinese novel. Same face slapping. Same trash harassing or liking female and because of that attacks ML. Cringe moments, females just attracted to ML all the time, despite him having pokerface all the time.
It tries to be funny but failed miserably.
The story is absolutely terrible. Given I read almost 300 chapters before I gave up. Translation is okay, and translators are amazing for updating so fast. However, this story sucks. MC is a total douche. If you’re a woman, you’ll absolutely hate it. It’s so ***ist and disgusting. Seems more like a story for guys who want some imagination, but I’m a girl so this is just offensive.
this is a good novel, hopefully it's not abandoned.
Well written, but ultimately boring read for me, the pacing of the story sedates me and I find despite my love for this novel (One of my first after CD,) I can't enjoy it especially at this point where it seems like training and school yard squabble take center stage and the parts that made my blood boil are long forgotten. too long forgotten.
All the unlocked chapters are good but the locked chapters after(60) are all MTL
It is the story called red packet server with a different tittle thats all. Not a fanfic or anything just pure copy paste of the original other than again the tittle.
Good
One of the best novels I have read. And as I have no experience in giving out reviews I will just say that it's "Amazing and well written"
Starting this book I was A bit pessimistic but then I realize i started to like it. So I continued and it seems to have me hooked. Having not read many books in this genre. I like the fact that I was recommended by a friend to try this.