MichaelWho
I'm new to WN as one of my friends recommended me to read this story. This story looks good but it has some flaws in its writing like the change in tense. Except that the writing is detailed and the plot is also really good. based on my enjoyment I would rate it as 5. The author can improve their writing and I'll be waiting for the upcoming chapters.
Like a lingering spirit, this translator is back to haunt more of your time on webnovel.com. While the book is categorized as a Horror title, it is actually more of a cross-over between horror and mystery. The premise is unique and it is definitely one of its kind despite the usage of well-worn trope like the system. Please give it a try even though if you're not a horror fan. I'm not one for horror stories but this is definitely worth it.
if I could give it less, I would. The damning nationalism is rather disgusting and extremely off putting. I understand that authors are often forced to put in nationalism as a way to placate their dictatorship but I recommend that they try to limit it as much as they can.
Incredibly boring also the real talent isn't permanent buffs, it's obscene plot armor. Also either the author or translator are literally begging for recommendations and tickets in the title chapters, so whichever one they are pretty shameless.The MC becomes overpowered on day 1 not just through permanent buffs which are literally handed out by every single thing he interacts with but even the drops are so overpowered that MC is literally killing lvl 80s in a duel arena, he's level 10 and btw this is server 9 and highest level player in the game is like 89. Too absurd. Oh right, the mmo was developed from studying tech from an ancient alien civilization so there's that.Wish fulfillment, cliches, don't even bother with this. So bad.
Starts off ok but then it becomes increasingly obvious that the MCA is weak AF. Also every chick wanting him is ridiculous. The only imagination put into the book is how he meets new girls but leaves them all hanging. Like how pathetic.
To be honest the story is great so far and I’m hooked. Chapter 55.But I have a question for the author, you said this was a rewriting of another story, but I want to know will this one follow the same story line as before or will you make changes??
author pls try to update soon ... ... cannot wait now pls if it is possible .........
please finish book
awwww i hope she gets her wolf, loving the story, well done
Seriously!! Can't get enough of this series!! LOVE IT!!!
My heart is aching to Darcy character...even her own parents doesn't love her. fortunately her twin and her best friend love her. i hope for the next chapter Darcy character will be brave and strong and reject Colton as her mate.
Hello Author... is the 2-4 chapters done on purpose? I can tell this story was not initially written in English due to the story line... is it in the midst of translation or is this meant to be like a mini-series on TV?
