Now he was currently waiting on the order to be dismissed as the Head Eunuch finish with the written decree.
Superrr, I wonder what's the mission they were given.I story as it goes is good, more characters than usual, not only focused on the main character ✌️Give me the vibes of game of thrones ?
so far seems pretty good.. lots of potential..
This is a relaxed story but it's not really to my taste. It's pretty much just the typical Japanese isekai MC except there's no harem, and he's not as OP. As another reader said in their review, it's kinda childish. I think it would've been better off if the MC was never an adult in the first place because he can't seem to determine whether he wants to behave like an adult or like a child. Even if he's physically 12, it doesn't make any sense for him to act like that considering he's a grown man on the inside, and also the experiences he's been through. Like he grew up in an abusive home, was married for a period of time, lost his wife in an accident, died a couple years after after being shot. With all these experiences, the personality he portrays doesn't make sense. Also, I don't get why the MC wished to be sent to a place far away from humanity when he isekaied but then the moment he came across humans who were a bit nice to him, he didn't hesitate to become their magical sugar-daddy. That aside, the grammar is really good and I didn't come across any errors that made reading difficult. I just couldn't get into the story. Goodluck with your writing, author.
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong???
So goodddd!!!!!, AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH PLZ UPDATE MORE AUTHOR-sensei release! Release! R lease! Release! Release! Release! Release! Release! Release! Release a, release!
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Personally, I am not a fan of reading horror stories but I think anyone who likes to read about gore and scary stories then this book might be right for you ??Keep improving author you're doing alright
Revenge (人 •͈ᴗ•͈)Mystery (◕ᴗ◕✿)Romance (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧All the things moonie loves!!!Good story and plot, good writing abilities!My readers, give it a try!
Finally a book that's well written on here. I've actually registered just to show my support for this one. Keep writing, want more!The characters are great, especially love the two zombie sidekicks, and it's about time someone took the side of evil!P.Oh, and 'Deceased and desist?' classic.
I very rarely rate 1 star, but this novel is the epitome of trash. Don’t waste your time.
Good book just not my cup of tea. I get irrationally irritated by MC gets system at perfect time. MC gets evaluation of the lowest order. MC is a crouching tiger in a field of sheep. MC will now hide and be bullied cause of said low evaluation. ahhh honestly it's because I like to predict what will happen next. Interesting premise though just not executed to my liking.