Hello_World_6395
Now I don't wanna read this
are you contuening the novel
Thank you for the chapter ☺️
I don't know if it's the novel itself or the translator, but reading this novel would require much more effort:)
Best writing quality good pacing of story very engaging story and plot. I am really looking forward for how the story would progress.
Wow! what an intriguing and captivating plot it go. Some parts I had to play the detective. kudos to the author and I would like to recommend this novel.
To who ever wrote that «18+ warning» up there I say :
1# no one give a sh*t .
2# thanks for the encouragement to read this .
3# already reading it .
The only way this fic is top and has a lot of votes is because is the first you see to unlock fast passes, that's all.
can someone tell me who's the artist for the cover/thumbnail? I'm annoyed that so many of these authors use other's artwork yet they don't credit the artist.
this rework of an already popular theme and not an original story there is little value in this story .I was hoping for something interesting, was disappointed .
I'm not sure how this novel is so highly rated. IMO it's flaws are unacceptable.
-Author lacks math knowledge. He's describing things such as vast oceans when the entire world itself is just a few football fields in size. Later on describes forests, poisonous swamps, etc. when the entire world is barely over 120 acres.
-The progress of others is not properly explained. The girl's world is somehow close to "creating cards" huh? How are their worlds even advancing? It takes eras for his world to progress, is it real-time for others?
- MC keeps doing some things out of nowhere just because that's the way...no prior introduction or explanation. Some actions, items, additions to simulation, etc. fall under this "just because" trend.
In short, can't recommend at all.
I love this novel. Sure its the typical run-of-the-mill wuxia but it has its own beauty...is what i thought until i got to the 900's after which i was thoroughly disappointed...the story is still great but the translations are beyond awful! Half the time im correcting the mistakes and rereading it just to keep going
