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what a sister & parents I am speechless .
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
After the 300th chapter, the realism decreases and the level of the novel drops. In general, it begins to describe illogical situations, fabricated without much thought. When you're in the harsh world of cultivation, it doesn't make sense to share secrets with near-strangers, pursue adventures that only bring you risks, and radically change your behavior from the initial chapters. Giving away what level alchemist you are puts you in a situation where they can kidnap you to use your talent, showing wealth that is beyond your level is also not recommended.
I really enjoy this novel and how everything is explained. The story flow is also perfect. Waiting to see more of this novel. Overall, it is an amazing novel.
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I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
This story is very interesting..this reflects how creative the mind of the writer is..though it is not complete yet but I really enjoy the story and I am waiting for the next chapter to be uploaded...
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This novel is one of the best On site hands down so many Writers fail to establish a romance that doesn’t make the Mc a simp or alows a side character to outshine the Mc, while at the same time The side characters have their own destiny and are not riding the coat tail of the Mc to gain power ups, his Potential girlfriend does not use him like in many stories on this site ???u200d♂️ she has her own goals and is just a ruthless as the Mc without out shining the Mc or slowing the the pace of the story down, you writers out there that Lie about ruthless Mcs in your description eat your hearts out ??and leaRn something from this master writer ? world building need some work but other than that Great work ????????????????????
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It is an enticing start! Makes me expectant of the following chapters... It is an enticing start! Makes me expectant of the following chapters...
The story created many small horrifying moments and if we keep our self's at the place of Alice then we are able to feel the guilt and horror and in yeshas place we feel the pain. But Lance interaction in the story should be increased. Overall the story was good and the suspense created was also nice.
