Interesting!
I knew the queen was the spy, otherwise why wasn't she present as a monster together with the king.....
Disappointed. Out of all the beauties in multiple realms he chooses to hook up with a child. Yeah she might be older than the mc but not only she has the mental of a child, she has a body of one to. The reason MC hooks up with her is because he said he doesnt want live with regrets. So if you want read this expect harem of all ages.
First of all, this plot is overall interesting and so different from what you would normally read. Plot-wise, the creativity and imagination put into this story is excellent. The action and fights add a nice thrill to whole story. Also, there this is a touch of sadness to the story, and there is mysterious cloud over the MC, which I think will made any reader want to know more about him. Keep up the good work!
Overall keep it up!!! Through I noticed some similaries between some of the other fanfics I read. Sure shamelessly supporting !!!Update soon!!!!!
280 chapters in.
This novel desperately needs an editor. Disciples become discipline, males turn into females, tenses get mixed up a lot and sentence construction is often awkward. Typos happen to everyone but seeing multiple such cases in every chapter quickly becomes annoying.
Overall story development and character design is very average. MC lacks both a real goal other than "get strong" and a real rival. So although the fights aren't exactly poorly written, they feel dull to read because there is absolutely no suspense. Similarly his growth doesn't feel special as there is no risk or struggle involved. MCs master seems to exist only to act surprised at his progress.
I do appreciate that his romantic interest remains relevant throughout the story, however the way its presented could use some work. Telling me what kind of emojis his girlfriend uses in her texts is just a waste of space. Not to mention she doesn't have anything going for her other than looks, which brings us to the next issue.
A lot of characters seem to serve no purpose other than cheering in tournaments. They bring neither drama nor comedy, they don't give insight into the world, they don't help develop MC. Especially the female characters - typically to the genre, they exist mostly for romance. For a novel set in past, this could be explained somewhat convincingly, however for one set in modern times?
Can't say much negative about world building as its basically a clone of modern world with martial artists thrown into it. However it does lack exposition in this regard - surely the inner workings and rules of society should have changed to accommodate people with supernatural abilities, yet the novel seems to barely gloss over such issues.
TL;DR Overall, its not the worst novel, especially if you can ignore its weak points and glaring lack of editing. However, would I put it on my recommended list? No.
Author, I have a question but before going to that topic I wanna say that so far I've read this novel it’s worth of my time, and I hope u won't drop it and continue to update it (Btw if u become bored then just give it a rush ending it’s better to read a with trash-ending than a dropped one). And my question is will there be romance in this novel or it'll be no-romance? Imo 'single female-lead' type is better than 'harem' or 'no-romance'. Also u should've update a few chapters explaining difference realms of cultivators or mages, different cultivation manuals, levels of artifacts and potions, magical beasts etc etc before start updating main part of this novel. Anyway we hope some bonus chapters about these.
At need time of this review I am at chapter 385. so far, I am really loving this book. The apocalypse piece mentioned in the title is not super relevant to the story at least at this time. it's more post-apocalyptic. The main male lead is as described he is definitely Op, but not in a way that he doesn't experience growth. he is swiftly gaining harem members. I really have almost no complaints about this story. it's really awesome and I recommend it to anyone that likes a harem. it is unique and does not feel like something you've read a thousand times. Read it!
Keep up the good work! Hope your passion for writing this doesn't die out even if you become busy af irl.
Good story but the author seems to have forgotten that the MC's system is supposed to help him level up because it the current chapters the mc has an excessive amount of unused experience points that for some reason he won't use even if he or someone he cares about life is in danger(like in the latest chapter how he almost died but it could have been avoided if the MC had used his exp. points.
mc is actually a naive villain, huh. just a few people's fault he hit flat. he wants true friends without pity, but mc's own condition has made people feel sorry for him. mc himself can't understand the feelings of some of his friends, why should his friends know the true feelings of this stupid and naive mc
I’ve definitely read this before or at least some veryyyy similar to this but I’m not sure where.