I've just started reading it and so far, it's really good. I recommend this novel ???
interesting. I am fooling forward to new chapters.
Solid work!
I feel that the pace is a bit too brisk at the beginning, with our MC being chucked into a training arc from the first chapter, but as you read on, the world expands and it all starts to click together.
The magic abilities introduced are interesting and I'd day the MC shows an affinity for them that's enough to pique a reader's interest, which is a plus!
Great work!
I am also writing a fantasy genre thing and this story is helping me discover more about that aspect. I am grateful. I completely recommend this book. It's a nice little read.
first thing : I enjoy this novel
the reasons :
- the MC s poised, he keeps his calm even when he is insulted, as he needs to protect his family, so far he's the only that's really done that in what I've read, at the same time he doesn't let weaker people step on him when it shouldn't happen
- the MC is not a complete cheat like existence like it often happens, there is a system but everyone has access to it. so far there's only one time during which it can be said there's plot armor (the stone)
- In the "cultivation world" there cannot be the intervention of someone overwhelmingly stronger as they go to other areas after becomming strong enough and they can't come back, I think it is great for the stability of the novel, and it enshures there won't be a ridiculous jump in strength coming from nowhere for the MC
- the world building has started in the 70ish chapters, so don't worry about it, in any case the novel is likely to have more than 600 chapters (or so I think - in any case it does have a great potential in terms of number of chapters)
the last point leads to me criticizing the haters : how THE HELL can you criticize a novel on its world building when you've only read as few as 10-20-30 chapters ???!? are you for real ?! I mean, seriously all the novels I've read on Qidian so far are bound to have hundreds if not more than a thousand chapters, just give the novels a chance to grow and set a foundation for the characters before the world, you are just being ridiculous otherwise, it's like relying on first impression to categorize people, it's nonsensical
Thanks for reading me :)
4000$ is nothing depending on features the phone offers.
beautiful story to keep away boredom...
I love this book it's just very sad that the audio for it stops at chapter 112. any chance the audio will be available anytime soon? I listen to it while I work and it's not convenient to read and drive
by reading other people's reviews, I do not think this story ends well. if it doesn't, then I don't think I can continue.
Amazing book. It's a must read.
I absolutely loved this book. You are a very talented writer. I look forward to reading all your future work. Thank you!
love this book!