I'm a fan of mystery, so this was my cup of tea. I love how the characters are described and detailed. I've seen some grammatical errors and I was confused at some times due to it, but I was still able to understand what was going on. I hope this story garners the attention it deserves, great job author!
Don't know much about novels with systems, but I can tell that this is an innovation. The title of the book is both hooking and intriguing. Never seen something similar to it before. The plot seems to have a lot going on too
The author has described everything in detail making it quite more interesting to read further. Reading a Sci-Fi for the first time and I'm already into this book[img=update]
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I refrain myself from reading horror story but this author has created the story in such a way that one will feel quite excited reading it. While reading the chapter it felt like that I should read more to know what is inside the story. Apart from it, the story appeared to me quite mysterious. Update more, dear author. You are going good.
Pancreatic cancer begins in the tissues of your pancreas — an organ in your abdomen that lies behind the lower part of your stomach. Your pancreas releases enzymes that aid digestion and produces hormones that help manage your blood sugar.
Several types of growths can occur in the pancreas, including cancerous and noncancerous tumors. The most common type of cancer that forms in the pancreas begins in the cells that line the ducts that carry digestive enzymes out of the pancreas (pancreatic ductal adenocarcinoma).
I'm liking the imagery and conversations had with the main character. This is definitely being saved, good work! [img=coins] [img=coins] [img=coins][img=coins] [img=coins] [img=coins] [img=coins]
Writing quality is mixed. Most of the storie is well written, but I can barely read the combat scenes.
Updates are near consistently dayly exept this month with 2 updates in 26 days.
The storie develops fine though sometimes it is a litle clunky.
The Caracter design seems to be above average, though the MC seems not that deep as of chapter 35. (Simple minded "I want to be strong to search my dead and because I embaress my family...") but there seems to be room for growth.
The world seems like the classical Invaded by foreign beings through portals, but there are hints on some depth beyond that in the human sosciety.
You wrote a good book! You used beautiful words to describe the situations in this book, the conversations also went smoothly and not awkward. I love your writing style, it's light but enjoyable. Looking forward to next chapters! [img=recommend]
One of the better pilot reads of this "batch." MC is guy who basically gets a system that let's him plagiarize any novel from his original world into this parallel world that is almost like Earth. Some people may find similarities to "I'm Really A Superstar" with the memory capsule, etc. But my initial feeling is that the story telling in this novel is well below that of IRAS.The story is fast paced and pretty illogical, I.e., the first novel he writes becomes an overnight hit and is basically well known by all - which is pretty unrealistic and breaks immersion in my opinion. He is then offered a contract by a publishing house where they basically stake everything they have on him, which again, is pretty unrealistic. There is none of the slow build up - but just instant success with this MC. It's It's shame as the slow build up would allow for greater character development and world building, like in IRAS. In short, worth a read, but only to pass time if there's nothing else to read. Pretty disappointing in the long run.
So, Novel with another system ?. I wish i was really good at Chinese, so i wouldn't be disappointed if the novel wasn't translated. Bruh I fantasize too much ?.#PositiveReview#SupportTranslator#SpecialReader#FinishTheBook#DontHiatus#GoodBook#HighQualityTranslationFollow my Tiktok : @douyin_land
I really love this novel! Had fun reading each and every chapter! Although the updates were pretty slow in the later chapters because of the author being busy with college stuff, besides that I don't have any complaints. The only thing I would want to say is, "I WANT MOAR!!!"