Stopped reading at chapter 63 (almost all of the free chapters) and my verdict is that this story is.....annoying.Annoying in that the author is constantly teasing readers by not revealing the ML's status to everyone this whole time. The reason it's annoying is because a person that is as stupidly stubborn towards their own family as the FML exists. And she has a husband who has the power to fix all the problems, but loves her so much that he wants her to show everyone what she is made of. So the problem is that the characters are realistic, and that they've just been running around this problem for so long now, all so that the author can write in face-slapping events. IMO, since he wants her to show how great she is to everyone, it could still be easily solved by publicizing his status, and then giving her free reign over her own companies to spread her wings.Other than that, the story starts off a bit awkwardly in that it doesn't talk about his coming-up story, and although not perfect, there are very few grammatical errors, so it isn't hard to read. The world is a mix of modern day and fantasy, with mentions of modern companies and whatnot
So I tried to come back to this story again... It's got a ton of potential but you'll run into a weird problem in it.The author said that ability is limitless time and again in this story. But at chapter 47 the teacher basically tells him that his ability has reached its peak and that the only way to advance if through buying a better cultivation manual. This is complete and utter BS. If origin abilities had limitations then why do they matter? Isn't it better to max out the harder to master human body?So I was pretty upset and went to read other reviews where I discovered that the MC only upgrades his ability through those cards in the future.Really this isn't a terrible idea but its the way the author writes this story that gets on my nerves. Maybe this story is good in it's home language but the translation for this story is beyond terrible. Half the sentences that should have a depth of meaning are pretty blunt and straightforward.Take this sentence:No wonder, with only an E grade talent, you rushed all the way to 200 points. With such a degree of model analysis, I’m afraid that this ability has already reached its peak.So the author does things like this a lot. What's it mean to rush all the way to 200 points? Didn't he spend years refining his ability? This is a Professor who is basically considering his training "rushing". It's these types of sentences that show up all over the place. Things that are hard and require effort or talent are discarded like that.And this is the second thing. His ability has reached its peak? How so? I can think of a few dozen ways model analysis could be used combatively and other ways.1. analysis of Terran and input of instant defensive equipment.2. Analysis of Unknown monster and identification of weaknesses instantly3. Analysis of tracks made and infer the originator via saved models.and so on. He's clearly a tracking/brain type. The key is his ability has to be instant, unblockable, and allow him to fight while using it. What sucks is apparently origin abilities can be blocked. This is a total wth moment. How is a world which uses origin abilities to fight blocked so easily?My second beef with the story starts at chapter 52. We just came from a fight with a repeater. What's completely bizarre in this fight is that the MC with 300 fitness points doesn't easily overpower a guy with 110.This is pretty much the example of combat you'll see from beginning until now. This author does not understand combat.
I don't know why but I found this book funny. You'll have to read it yourself to see if you agree lol. There are a few typos but so far it's not too horrifying.
2 days of free time , tumble across this , no more freetime .Yup 48 straight hours of reading , with one stop of 2 hours of reading , I hate myself , I look like a ghost but yet... would do it again , I'm freakin' addicted.Story is full of cliche , "You're courting death" is always coming back , but I seem to not get enought of it , MC has his principles and adheres by them , which is something I absolutely love.He stays in mysteries most of the time and I keep wondering what would happen to say something like "Yup **** it , I've got the knowledge of the peak from 10,000 years ago and 20,000 years ago of Martial,Weapon master , Inscription, Pill domains."To Translator , keep up the good work , still need more chapters to feed my addiction :D
This is the first novel i had read at apps or webs that its really well written. It takes the details in consideration, the feeling of the characters far away just being scared or happy. Deep thoughts and fellings. Also the characters have a relly good development, the evolution is not to early.
Can’t wait for more from you on more than just this book I love the way you write
Gosh, Idh why his anger makes me shudder
I want to sue the author for unfinished book after wasting so much on it !
Love this book can’t wait for more!
I can’t wait for more chapters to this book. It’s really getting good.
loving the story so far
A VERY GOOD BOOK. So interesting that it got me hook. Will be reading some more. #Halfway in the story.