This book is great just like the first one! You're a great writer and I can't wait for more chapters!
Hi, have you ever thought about expanding your work to other platforms?
YES my boys are reborn time to get into this please I want a happy ending this time my heart can't take anymore authornim I will be back for review when I finish reading
This is the first book I’ve read that’s not wolf related and I’m actually enjoying it, hoping he takes her as his wife
...... I’m scared for grace though
waiting for the next chapters, kindly update.
Okay so let me just say this chapter is a masterclass in how to handle a rebirth revenge plot without making it feel cheap or rushed. Feng Moxi doesn't just randomly kill her enemies—she sets it up like a chess game. She spots them first, recognizes them from her past life, processes the emotional damage, and THEN executes her plan. The fact that she uses the mutated Golden Retriever as her weapon instead of doing it herself is genuinely clever. She stays hidden behind the wall, manipulates the beast with her divine sense, and lets karma do the dirty work. That's not just smart plotting—that's satisfying storytelling. The structure here is also really tight. Chapter 19 sets up the encounter and the emotional weight, then Chapter 20 delivers the payoff with Zhang Tao's gruesome death. But what I love most is the pivot at the end—after the revenge scene, the narrative shifts to supply gathering and the looming threat of the Golden Retriever possibly coming back. It's like the author is saying, hey, this victory doesn't solve everything. The tension doesn't drop; it just changes shape. And that ending with the distant dog barks? Chef's kiss. It leaves you hanging in the best way possible.
I’m not sure about it
72 chapters 7-21-23
keep going, lookin forward for the next chapter! ? if you have any socmed to keep up with your readers, please let me know :) thank youu
It's a fun novel featuring an overpowered main character (MC) and is largely a wish-fulfillment story about entering the Marvel universe. I’d even say it’s more like a fanfiction about entering the Marvel universe with a system-like power.
The MC has the ability to extract other people's talents for his own use, though there are some limitations. As a result, he keeps getting stronger and stronger.
Honestly, it’s well-written and enjoyable to read, unless you can’t stand seeing the original Marvel world as you know it being altered. ?
If your only reason for reading this novel is the author, please reconsider. I am a huge fan of the author's other works, and seeing a review that described this novel as a light-hearted read got me excited. My first thought was of "Yue Xia Die Ying," where the author successfully transitioned from a heavier style to a lighter one.
However, changing writing styles shouldn’t mean abandoning all the elements that made the previous works great. What I love about "Ill-Fated Consort" and "Malicious Empress" are the strategic elements—the scheming, the plotting, and the intelligence of the female lead (FL). So, why does Yang Zanxing not use her head? I made it to chapter 26 and couldn’t take it anymore. But wait, it’s not just the FL. Cultivation isn’t just about physical strength and flashy moves; it’s also about mental acuity. There’s no excuse for the other characters’ behavior. It feels like I’m reading about a group of middle schoolers.
Another issue I have is how the FL handles the chauvinistic setting of the novel. She has done nothing about it, even when she had the chance. For example, with her maid and coachman, she is their master. She had multiple opportunities to make them understand that she doesn’t want to depend on a man and that her life goal isn’t to get married. But she stayed silent and let her maid go on about finding a new husband. God forbid she doesn’t. The FL wouldn’t be out of character (no one has enough sense to notice), so there’s no excuse.
In conclusion, comparison is the root of all evil. I’m upset because I’ve read the author’s previous works. Dear reader, maybe you’ll have a different experience. Give it a try.