This is the worst novel i have read so far in webnovel, if it was possible to give a 0 for the score, i would have done it.The first 10 chapters are good but it's just a trap...
The ring is the MC and the hero is (insert wearer here). So far plot is nice and original, which is refreshing for me. The quality of writing kinda skips dialogue and jumps into chase explained the situation to X(can’t be named). Other than that I find the buying point is the plot of a ring (supporting the) hero and how the MC interacts with the world around him (or the system).I also want to further comment on....E X P Had to do it. That was not a comment Good luck author for however your directions lead you.
Interesting novel, very good for those who wants to laugh lots, the way its written makes it even better.Not too much chapters until now, but i did see a good potencial for this novel, it may turn out like LOHP (library of heavens path) or 'number one founder'. So if you like these two novels, i'd recommend this one to you as well.
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Character Design no al, 1-145 chapter in mc is still a much stupider simp. bottom of the world not al......................................................................................................................................................................................................
I'll thickened my face and rate my own novel. Just to be your frontliner... :)First of all, thank you for all those who read this novel. And for this those who didn't, I hope you can give this novel a chance and took a peek.---Writing a novel is something that I really liked to do. I've written a lot of it, though those works are not posted on the web as I am always afraid of what others may say about my work. Until one day, I started reading the comments and reviews from the readers of the book i was reading, and found out that writing a novel is not only about writing your imaginations and stuff but also knowing what your readers thought of what you've written. So I encourage you guys to write a review for this novel... This is for my own self-improvement, and for your own self-satisfaction... :)I hope that you'll keep reading this book... Enjoy... ;) ;) ;)
This needs to be finished. I hope that Webnovel does the courtesy of allowing this novel to be completed. Even though this is different than butterfly blue’s other novel, this is at least worthy enough to allow the last 170 chapters to be done.
For a guy who was apathetic even when he's sentenced to death became a warm goody good guy as soon as he play the game? what's up with flirting around with all these npc? its like he's hitting on to every woman he comes across.. MCs character can change, but shouldn't there be a transition period !here it happened instantaneously. what's wrong with MC to drop his advantages (dude is flame talent but won't train it?? )There's these random characters popping up without propet introduction too. plus what's wrong with his levels? isn't the prisoners supposed to be beta players !how come there are others with higher levels ! too many inconsistencies for me. i think it's not my cup of tea. l did liked the concept though. i don't know whether the story gets better in further chapters(i only read up to 23, so this can be considered only as a first impression). nice attempt bro. really appreciate your efforts.
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No harm plsNo negetative IQ villains plsNo female fall in love at first sight due to some kind of stupid reasons plsNo stupid decisions pls No dodo birds pls...wait I take this one back I like dodo birds :) wait...they are extinct *D:*
This book may be better than others in this batch but the original was dropped by the author halfway through. The same thing happened to the other book written by the author