Hi! Author here!
My sincere apologies for the mistake with the last two chapters, 'B' and 'The VIP' It's been corrected, kindly refresh and check, the last chapter should be 'The VIP' but the second to the last should bear 'Upholstery' as its title. Kindly let me know here if it's been corrected.
this book is amazing to reading but we have wait for to achieved the coins and it take a lot of time and date ,it waste of time as well as my date finish so much that I couldn't get next chapter to read. it fun to to read again, I special like it so much, wow it was great even it taking my time ,da
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there is this wonderful person, that kept unlocking each chapter with his/her money. I want to thank you so much for your support. for adding the book to your library was enough to make me feel happy but yet, you kept unlocking them to read.... thank you so much ?
Very good
Worth it if you like complex systems
BL? What does it mean?
It is not that bad, at least until chapter 100 and a very quiet reading for those who like slice of life.
What is "the damned demon"
Hey...
Are you a ... dude?
ohh, this many side stories.? I've never seen this many side stories in a novel...
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This is another review of mine, focusing more on criticism. this novel has 2 problem the first one is typos which is not really a problem because the author update everyday, which is tiring. the second one is the way it's written it could be better, in the first few chapters this was a problem but as story progress this become less a problem. But this is just a recommendation on how the author can improve his writing which works like this.
Cao Cap: i Will destroy you liu bei for attacking my territory
Liu Bei: Haha! go on and try cao cao! this is the day you fall!
try doing this-
Cao cao was angry and anxious of what's happening on his territory because of the sudden attack of liu bei causing him to be angry which result in continously screaming at liu bei, while liu bei simply taunt and with full confidence trimuphly think that this is the day his archenemy falls.
As the story progress i noticed this happening which improved the story on another lvl but it would be appreciated if this type of writing become a norm and continue progressively, while i don't see any problem with the former the new way of writing cause its quality to improved.