Ling Yue threw her a scowl and hesitated before saying, "Th-The papers are fake."
Anna - How do you know ?
"You..." Yan Du's eyes are cracking. For the first time in more than ten years, some people dare to look down on him, and the other party is still a teenager.
Sabar ya bro. Saya mash ada urusan ni. Ni juga di usahain ngetik chapter. Sabar ya bro
Si anak mulai merasa takut, lalu menjawab dengan gemetar, "Kenapa semua tidak boleh bu, apa aku cuma boleh jadi ibu rumah tangga saja?"
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For them, only less than a day had gone by since they had seen Alexander. But, Alex and the Lu sisters only know the brutal process they went through to get this strong.
"No, indeed, Mr. Sinclair, although i thank you for being your kind offer of hospitality."
So I've got a few things to point, first off, there are way too many Bell's POV, from what I understood about the story it should focus on Emiya however there is much more Bell moments than Emiya moments, second thing is that you stick too much to the original while sometimes "forget" that Emiya is there with Bell + Extras, also Ottar is lvl 7, not lvl 8, he is one of the two level 7 in the world. Other than that it's still good