How can novels be reviewed before chapters release? @qidian @webnovel please disable before chapters release XD bad design...Though, I do hope this is a good novel.
A typical cliché chinese novel with a super arrogant mc, one dimensional characters, and a copied plots.Don't believe me.Try it and you'll understand what i mean.
The storyline and characters of this novel are really good, I am looking forward for the character development of MC and heroines and the future plots and challenges. I recommend you all to read this novel.
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This had potentially to be a pretty interesting novel with a unique idea. Unfortunately, it's been completely ruined by poor grammar, poor dialogue and poor everything, only thing good was the concept.First of all, this author has attempted to copy dialogue from all the chinese novels out there. They've failed badly; it's clear the author has never even had a proper conversation with a fellow human being. The grammar is awful, the interactions are just awkward and they try so hard to sound profound but the author doesn't know what they're typing so it just sounds stupid. The author has tried to make the MC talk like how an elder in let's say a cultivation novel talks, sounding profound and all except it doesn't here, it just sounds stupid because it makes no sense and it's filled with bad grammar. Even without the grammar issues, the phrases don't flow well anyways so it doesn't matter.It's obvious the author spent a bit of time looking over the first chapter and then started speedrunning through the rest without proofreading or editing.
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Let’s start with the best shall we? I very much enjoyed the story so far. The character development is solid but dark. This novel isn’t for the faint of heart. Great world building and character diversity. Yes the writing could be better, but it hasn’t gone down and it gets the point across. Of course I would like to see more chapters released daily. Overall I would very much recommend this novel.
I think it's well-written and some of the low reviews entirely based themselves on grammar issues and such, which were actually not that present.This is the author's first book and the issues that I have seen will be improved through more writing and otherwise, the story is interesting and worth a read, the writing can use some improvement but I think the author already has good descriptive ability.Give it a read, everyone!
A twist in transmigration with the Chinese MC to a white Texan high school graduate. The writing is superb, character development consistent and the story plot is steady. What makes it a delight is that I’m from San Antonio, Texas and am very familiar with the towns and cities in the story. It seems to have stopped at chapter 60 as of 3/12/20. I look forward to further chapters soon.