Pretty decent start although there is some confusion with how the sign in system works and I'm not sure if the author or translator are at fault.... but it was entertaining and the sample left off at the perfect spot to make you want mooooor.
Quite decent story, worth to try reading.
But it's unknown if it will be atencion grabbing in the future. It's kind of slow pace and mc not to dumb but not smart too.
yall this is such a good one wish there was more of it!!!
looks awesome but probaly wont get picked so people whats the raw before its gone?
Look the story was good but the title was differ from the summons. He summon different species not elves only. It a great story have similarity or maybe Chinese counterfeit.
Author's Review!
Well, what happens when you get bored with the same old MC sitting in lotus position and cultivating his life away?
Dual cultivation and the fact that only MC could cheat using this without any common sense or logic?
Bored with Alchemymaster/Forgemasters/Swordmasters/Formationmasters etc etc etc MC's?
Here I present to you a unique way of cultivation, Kama Sutra. Kora Le Blank(MC), a being with a transcendental mentality, couldn't leave behind his sensual desires even though he knew nirvana could only be achieved via letting go of all mortal desires, treads on the demonic path where virtue and sin are non-existent, using rituals as a method to grasp what he so desires--Nirvana.
La mejor obra en mucho tiempo, hay tanto del mundo que quiero ver y espero tanto de este protagonista, espero llegue a ser tan fuerte como un dios
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This is my first novel, I know very well that it is full of errors, but I hope everyone will criticize what he sees as incorrect so that I can improve myself.
I hope someone who reads in silence will make me hear his voice too
English is not my first language, so forgive me for the mistakes. Thank you to those who supported me, especially my mother and sisters. Without them, I would not have dared to write.
Lot of typos and improper English. Good story but seemed like it was written like a teenager. Plus characters could have had more depth and story development.
Yo. Think, you have the solution for the biggest problem in your life.... but still can't overcome it, it doesn't matter and feel like you don't matter. Welcome to my world.
Go to that shop you have always wanted to but didn't cause it's expensive. go get that thing you wanted as a kid, go get that stuff you want right now. try what you always wanted to. Drink that expensive cocktail you wanted to, try that expensive dish you always wanted to try.
do whatever you want, doesn't matter what you do, this world won't change... cause you don't matter. if everyone will become special, unique, then who will be unique and special?
This is how the cover for the first volume: My Ring System looks like.
A dark, suspenseful and well-written story. Every chapter constantly keeps me on my toes, and I can feel the character's pain and frustration. Best of luck with your story [img=recommend]