Grand_Void_Daoist_45
Great novel ...... unfortunately I have to drop it since I can't tolerate him being a simp towards two women (those two just don't deserve it). Simping should have limits!!!
The more I read the more I am saddened how such a masterpiece is being butchered by mediocre translation. Qidian, please find a new group for this novel. At this point I would rather read the MTL.
I will summarize what I feel when I reading this story in one sentence. "It would be a much better story if author just write it as a fantasy story".
I like how he tells story especially how he make the MC shine in his story. I like it.
But... since this is a VRMMORPG story, the game itself has not so good game structure and it also show how bad author deal with numbers. I expect a lot of readers to have ? in their head when reading some gaming logic and numbers in this story.
Sorry, but to me it’s more like list than a story….
loving this novel's story and world , wish i could go there myself , the author is obviously very creative , imaginative and intelligent to have created this fine work of art , hopefully he will continue to write this legendary masterpiece
This is the novel I was looking for
omg author
I hope u don't abandon the novel and I will help you with everything I have
Just help, and I think it is good, basically for newbie author, can't give 5 star, overall just make sure this project to improve your writing quality,
THE STORY ENDED AUTHOR!
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Hey author, is it necessary to read this to read Guardian of the end? Like is the mc in guardian of the end related to mc of this novel or something?
I like the idea but I couldn't get past the third chapter with how bad the Grammer is. I can't piece together what the author is trying to say. I hope that the author can improve.
I unique concept to begin with.. also an MC who loves sleeping more than his life! Not the usual masculine, overly handsome cold ML, but some every male... thats a great beginning... his expressions and feelings for the new world are on point! Great work author
The Best Sect Building system i have ever read. Good character building. I just love the way the author started this novel. Hope the author won’t dropped it!!!
