MC becoming godlike and emotionless really fast. The writting and the translation is horrondous to get through. Better to read something else !!!!!
Está muito bom e uma caixinha de surpresas mas senhor atpr você está bem?afinal você sempre atualizava mas seguido e anormal então estou preculpa se você estiver se esforçando demais afinal pode ser meu escritor favorito mas deve se cuidar devidamente principalmente depois da pandemia que ocorreu. ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆
A tasty blend of many popular flavors, in a crispy delicious shell with the right amount of crunch, but not too much crunch. Too many numbers really overwhelm the palate, and are best carefully managed like the right amount of salt.Eat your vegetables, boys and girls, Voren certainly does, and he gets big and strong thanks to it!
Storyline it's okay background world seems good to. Will see what next ?.!!
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A very interesting novel at the benining but the naming is abit inappropriate, it should be "the rise of the hogworts!" I am at 100+ chapter in raws and the more I read the more intense the feeling, well in the whole journy we may face a fragmented harry potter story in a watered-down virsion(from a CN 3rd person view), but otherwise, the overall story development is also quite constent. I might change this review if it gets better though.
the story might seem a little complicated at first and the mc seemed to do stuff out of nowhere, but things become very clear later on I really liked the plot twists,at the end good story and would recommend it.
What is the raw version name.
change the cover. that might be the reason why it doesnt get much votes for weeks. the cover gives a bad impression. the vibe gives impression that its not good a read.
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Great novel 10/10.