Immortal_kid
This doesn't have NTR... Some stupid ***** ruined such a good novel's release rate.... **** you!If not for this, this novel would certainly have been the best in the whole of the web novel in this bloody site.
Ok I can honestly say that this novel really isn't a rip off of "Digging to survive i can see hints". Because honestly this novel is way better in all ways compared to "Digging to survive i can see hints". I have read "Digging to survive i can see hints" up to chapter 50 while I have read this novel up to chapter 20 so far I can see many similarly between them both but I can confidently say that "Digging to survive i can see hints" is like a complete knock off version of this novel in my opinion compared to this novel. I don't know if its just me but between the two stories I feel that there is more human interaction in this novel compared to "Digging to survive i can see hints" also there stakes are higher in this novel comparatively being that we actually learn there are groups of people competing for resources while we get to know about these groups unlike how in "Digging to survive i can see hints" it just says there are groups and we don't actually get any information about any group. There's also this leader board thing that we learn about in chapter 19 I think which I feel helps to have a clear goal for the moment in th book because in "Digging to survive i can see hints" I feel there isn't real comprehensive goal besides surviving.
I think the one major drawback of this novel is the main character. He is way too impatient about everything. You'd think a guy who spent years in a wheelchair, saw his mother almost get assassinated, and thinks his brother's death was part of some conspiracy would try to lay a bit lower and increase his strength more. I mean per the novel the MC's brother was roughly 20 times more powerful than the MC is at chapter 25 and had way more real world experience and the MC is trying to rush to figure out what happened to him. Maybe get stronger first. The world background seems relatively interesting. The other characters seem to be written with more sense than the MC which is nice. The problem is that they aren't the person you are reading about. The story development feels a bit rushed mostly because of the MC's personality.
I read up to about chapter 28, but I just couldnt buy the characters choices. He gets roped into becoming a drug dealer or worse, his bouncer, for no reason at all. He's the land lord, and he's in the position to be a witness, and he's the kid with no motive. Anything happens to him and it's all over for that guy. He's got the power, but he caves like a total beta, yet it's clear that's not where the author wants to go with the MC. It looks like the author wants the MC to become some, raging, alpha, badass from the 80' or 90's who smokes, deals drug, drives a bike, and bangs girls that look and act like hookers. Sorry, even if it made sense, it doesn't, that's not actually so cool. Cool wouldn't have to try so hard to look cool.
I haven't read the novel yet but I saw the harem tag so, I will be reading it from now. This five star is in advance for it to make this work, awesome...... ?????????????????????
Overall this is still considered a good novel. The storyline might be different than standard novels but still worthwhile reading in my point of view. The starting chapters may seem boring. The MC is young and inexperience. Even though he is righteous to protect the human species but sadly he was betrayed. He was taken in as a disciple of a Demon Master and to further temper his skills, the Master encourage him to visit the Demon cities thus beginning his adventure
Mc has some serious brain problem.Find some random useless guys and girls and fight to protect them while sharing the resources to make them stronger......
The plot was a bit common with the same orphan thing in the starting but still, you did your best to make it different from others. The book is still in its starting stage so I can't say much about it but I bet its a promising novel.so keep it up and sorry for the late review.
I am going to read this book because I like your other book 'Trash in the apocalypse'. .... ......................................................................
Kinda disappointing. Mc is a beta and underwhelming, story is plain confusing. Feel no enjoyment from this . Shame
sounds interesting hoping for more chapters keep it up and don't drop.....................................................................................................................
This is garbage. I have tried twice now to read this because the concept sounds interesting. It is written about a man who was scammed and now goes about being a scammer. His justification is that all the men he cheats are rude, ignorant and racist. Yes, every man in the book is racist against the Chinese. While the women a virginal saints that need the MC to save them. If this was a magic setting instead of a real place it would still be crap. Because all the interactions are the same and the characters are one dimensional.
