I like this one. It could be a gem; emphasis on could.
Even giving it a 2 is already very, very, very generous on my part. So what gives? Well, it's the grammar.
No, not the grammar of the original (I don't know Japanese well enough for that), but the "translated/edited" version we're reading here is the problem.
It is mentally exhausting how many times I had to correct the grammar in my head. It's depleting my mental energy faster than I anticipated.
[**Edit: I think I was deluded into thinking this was actually edited, and now correctly realize that this was just a machine translation that was slightly polished. They (whether solo or a group) patted themselves on the back and called it a day. My points below make more sense in light of this MTL revelation.]
My biggest gripe with the grammar issues is that the main character’s name changes 2-3 times, and the increasing difficulty in identifying who is currently speaking. This is compounded by the lack of cues indicating whether the speaker is engaging in internal monologue or external dialogue.
And perhaps the worst atrocity of all is the simultaneous use of first and third-person sentence structures, making it seem like everyone is suddenly schizophrenic and a company of two has turned into a group of 3-4 people. This is made even more egregious by the boastful addition of "editor" all over the place, often alongside "author," despite this clearly being a translation—now that’s an ego check if I’ve ever seen one.
But I digress. Despite my generosity and the valid criticisms I've pointed out, I still stand by my opinion that this could be a (niche) gem if it were cleaned up by an actual editor. In that case, I could give this a 3 or 4 stars (though a 4.5 would be necessary).
It seems like the reviewer is expressing confusion about the book's tone shift, particularly regarding the protagonist's journey. They find it odd that despite initial darkness after a betrayal, the story becomes more hopeful. The main female characters' desire for the hero's happiness and redemption is seen as a redeeming factor, even if it involves some clichés.
The reviewer does acknowledge some positive aspects, such as well-developed fight scenes, the character's growth from an edgy persona back to his original self, and a consistent plotline. They also enjoy the engaging interactions between characters. However, they criticize the excessive use of tropes and references, which they feel might be outdated, and the cringe-worthy portrayal of the hero's class when he interacts. They admit that while the plot might be predictable for fantasy fans, it could still serve as a decent starting point for newcomers.
In summary, the reviewer appreciates certain elements but feels that the book relies too heavily on cliches and could benefit from a fresher approach to storytelling.
Regarding the story being fanfiction, the author skillfully blends original plot elements with their own, creating a unique blend. In terms of reading enjoyment, I often find myself frustrated, mainly due to my personal preferences on how the characters should develop. The pacing stands out, as the power progression is slower than typical system novels, allowing for character development and diverse storylines without excessive power leveling.
The system itself is underpowered and demanding, requiring significant effort and resources to advance. This might frustrate readers who prefer quick power-ups, but the system's reliance on real-world media for reference adds an interesting layer, making it potentially powerful if utilized strategically.
The system works like a mobile game, where characters collect shards and recharge diamonds using real currency. However, the MC's lack of resource management and occasional reckless spending becomes a point of annoyance. Initially portrayed as a caring older brother, the MC displays inconsistent behavior, particularly during instances of sexual assault and obsession with legs, which detracts from his character.
The action scenes can be frustratingly predictable, with the MC's strength oscillating between vulnerability and overwhelming power, resembling a common anime trope. The MC's decision-making seems naive despite claiming an adult's maturity, leading to a disconnect.
In the romance aspect, the author's choice of romantic interests appears forced, with the MC's attraction to characters like Hanc*ck feeling contrived. The MC's dislike for Hina based on age difference is followed by a sudden interest in Hanc*ck, suggesting a predetermined love interest. The portrayal of Hanc*ck's affection feels shallow compared to other fanfictions.
Despite these issues, the novel is still a decent read. The MC's shortcomings prevent me from fully enjoying it, but the writing itself is commendable. I'd rate it 4 stars for its readability, despite the unsatisfactory aspects related to the main character and the treatment of female characters, which is common in this genre.
That is the majority simoly because cooking french fries is much easier than preparing a five course meal.
If you get what im implying.
I see, thanx mate for your reply.
i read till chap 75 now
i enjoyd it but its sad he keeps his power hidden
and the translastion makes me drop it
but maby il reteurn if i dont find anyrhing to read
*looks confused then hands a banana confusedly*
wait, how is the ending bad? i need to know if it is still worth reading or not. I hate bad endings with a passion.
This novel is actually quite amusing. It reminds me of the manga "A Man Defies the BL World," where the main character is aware he's in a romantic love (BL) context and tries to avoid triggering those scenes. Song Nanshi is very much like that character, which is quite entertaining.
Additionally, the protagonist has a knack for bad luck, but there's a reason behind it. As someone who dares to spy on heaven's secrets as a mortal, she carries one of the so-called "Five Misfortunes and Three Lacks": being widowed, lonely, orphaned, disabled, or lacking wealth. Unfortunately, she falls into the worst category – financial hardship. That's everyone's worst nightmare, huh. But at least she didn't start off with this unfortunate streak.
1: I can agree with you up to a certain point. Let's clarify a few things
First: There's no doubt that the main character is *h*rny, but claiming he jumps on every woman he meets is incorrect, although not entirely. Unlike other novels, there's no explicit description of s*x scenes. It's simply mentioned that it happened, and the story moves on (which I appreciate). So saying it ruined your reading experience doesn't make sense. I'd understand if you said it had many chapters dedicated solely to s*x, like other novels, but we know it barely has a few lines dedicated to it. Clearly, the author wanted to focus on the plot rather than the act itself.
Second: Stopping after the first 60 chapters doesn't provide much insight. Chapters are lengthy, and a lot happens within the initial 60, but is that enough for conclusions? Definitely not. I'm currently at chapter 358, and I can tell you the plot is still going strong. The writing is good, events aren't random,and there's a purpose behind-
o que mais me deixou em dúvida foi o fato de eles fazerem tudo isso, se arriscarem tanto para conseguir os lagartos, sendo que no final falaram que existia um teletransporte para o outro lado. Por que eles não negociaram o teletrnsporte ao invés de tentar negociar os lagartos, que são de extrema importância e valor para os diabólicos deste lugar?
Is this a good read