Where are the updates? I really want to continue reading this novel but there are no new chapters. Does anyone know why there are no new chapters for this novel?
The story starts off well enough. Minor weird or bad points but well within acceptable levels. However the sypnosis is very misleading because his "grand plan" took 1 paragraph to unfold. And it wasmt really much of a plan.Quality rapidly took a deep dive downwards as the story continued. English standard clearly went down sharply and characters say or do or think things in an incredibly convenient way for the sake of the plot, often acting in ways that totally disregard any resemblance of intelligence the character may have previously displayed. Author tries to use certain phrases in wrong ways or simply force them into a persons speech leading to awkard lines of dialogue or paragraphs that are impossible to read. The worse of which was when he tried to combine 2 phrases into a line: Hold your high horses. Overall, story quality is barely average and quickly drops off into mindless territory with highly inconsistent characters.English quality starts at proper english before rpaidly becoming a hodgepot of barely legible paragraphs, overly bombastic but meaningless lines and tottally unreadble paragraphs.Read it if you are bored with nothing else to read between updates and you like the genre. Recommen you at least have complete mastery of english so that you can understand the pidgin gibberish this novel tries to use so often.
The logic is not strong with this one. Author jacks up common sense to force the character into cliche situations that don’t make sense. Sounds like whenever the author reads a cliche situation, then they feel obligated to include it in their story without any buildup or regardless of it making sense in the novel. 5/5 for stable releease, 1/5 for everything else. Wish i could give a 10/5 for overusing plot armor
Another sign ... Not an everyday sign in thing so it's not really leaning on the system. The story without it is a little captivating. Looking forward to it
This novel is awesome.., but I wont read it. Why? Because nothing translated yet. Maybe one day in the future, but not today. Thats it.
It's a wish fulfillment. Mc just hypnotizes and fucks women, that's the whole story currently.
Anyone has the raw title? it seems to have been changed. can't find it.???
This novel surprised me greatly. I'm not sure what I expected going into this story, but I wasn't expecting to enjoy it so much. This was an incredibly relaxing story to read. Usually when I get sucked into a story it's because it's exciting or I'm intrigued to know more, but the best way I can think of to describe this story was I was comfortably snuggled up in bed and didn't want to get up.Characters - We'll start with the MC. Probably what makes you feel relaxed the most. He's a very peaceful and spiritual person, very knowledgeable, and handles life in a smooth manner as is fitting of his raising. He follows his heart and just his way of handling life is something that I really wish I had in my life.The side characters are significantly better than you'd expect from a livestream audience. While only a few of them have been named or interacted with, there is still subtle details and character hidden in the interactions. I'm hoping some of these characters stick around long term to watch the MC's rise.World -World building is a bit slack here, but it's not something to dock the story on. It's a modern day world, probably Earth, and that's about it. This isn't really a story that so far has needed extensive world building and background though, and what is needed exists.Style -This is where the story shines for me. The relaxed feel, the smooth information and knowledge dumps, the details about nature and the world around the MC. All of it just combines to make this story really stand out to me.Overall - I'm off to find and read the MTL after posting this. Hopefully it's not too bad, because I really want to just keep reading. I haven't felt this good after reading something in a long time. No excitement or heart racing, just want to keep staying in this comfy bed a little longer.
PKEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER THIS IS THE ONLY THING KEEPING ME ALIVE RN PLEASE ILL DO ANYTHING IM BEGGINGDKXKV DVVVVVKDVVVVVVVVVVV REEEEEE
I am really looking foward to see the story develop into. The systems seems to be a little different than in other stories.So far the story is interesting to read.
I find it enjoyable with an OP main character. The updates are lacking though. However, I knew this was going to happen. It became number 1 on GT and is now being dual hosted. It's only a matter of time before it becomes premium which is when I'll drop yet another novel just like with what happened with RSSG. I'll only read it on GT until that happens though.
This novel has high potential to be awesome. This 140 chacter review thing is pissing me off ???????????????????????????????????????????????????