What a beautiful story. This storyline is intriguing. This book has a lot of potential and great characters. Keep writing. Keep up the good work.
It's good I really liked the story, I like FL more than ML she is more courageous when it comes to love but MC acts like an idiot.
You should have locked chapter after chapter 60, It's too soon to lock the chapter.
got clickbaited sighhonestly a good novel just not my type has all the elements of a good novel in it at least till ch 3 or 5 it's just the perfect starter novel type thinganyway got clickbaited thought it was an ancestor type novel but isn't
Potential don’t drop but how many world would he go and also you have to remember all cartoon or kid tv show are op like sponge bob literally destroyed the universe in a matter of second and also saint seiya or ben 10. But also sacred gears of dxd mix with the cloths of saint seiya is equal to op equipment.
Also should check fandom wiki about powers.
Also you should read battle accros the Omni verse an d many other fanfic and also annihilation maker fanfic.
Good luck
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Writing Quality 5/5
There are a few grammar mistakes but not enough to break the 'immersion', it is overall entertaining and immersive.
Story Development 4/5
There has been one red flag but it is so far good
Character Design 4/5
Updating Stability
3/5 One chapter a few is simply not enough for the readers and for the book to grow
World Background
4/5
Story Development 4/5
This book has everything from personal development to best protective husband to equal importance to each and every character.Their arc is well planned only sad thing author could have extended it a bit more last 2 chapters were bit fast but seeing the Fl not having golden fingers and still achieving everything it was worth it
this is exciting and fun to read its awesome
love this story so far! was disappointed to see that there isn't more, @leftpinky waiting anxiously for more chapters!
Story for the first eleven chapters was pretty good. Minor grammatical errors aside, it was pretty solid.
Story immediately fell off after chapter 12. Main character is revealed to be a busybody that will endanger his own life for someone he has never met before. Main character can literally practice martial arts and cultivate, but instead he gets into random street fights with gangsters while simping over some random girl. Before that fight happened, he paid for multiple meals of a girl from his class, costing a lot of his money. I find it astounding considering she probably makes more than he does. Also, I'm getting sick and tired of the love at first sight cliche, it's such a lazy way of having romance.
World background is decent, nothing terrible, but nothing good either. I can't remember if they introduced the country or not.
Overall, it was going good, but it's readily apparently the main character is not going to have any intelligence throughout the novel, and is going to kill himself trying to get a harem as fast as possible.
Intense, deep, and mysteriously written.
I've seen the effort of the writer to accomplish what the book trying to say. In fact, I've feel shame to call myself an author for taking quite long to found out how amazing this book is written.
If you're a fan of Agatha Christie's mystery, go ahead and read this.
If you're a fan of Young Detective Kindaichi, Conan, or Dan Detective School, you must read this.
If you're a fan of mystery novel, an especially good one, READ THIS!!!
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So far, this is looking pretty good - I mean, for a Webnovel trial read, anyway. It's straightforward, doesn't rely on reactions and padding, delivers what it promises, and has a character that isn't just another generic Xianxia protag.
Hoping it gets picked.